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  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Random, Pretentious and Deliberately Ambiguous Questions

    Hey there BloodInk! I've been seeing you around the site more and more lately and decided to come and check out some of your works. The title grabbed me. Anything ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Play

    To quote MysteryMe: Wow.... honestly, this is stunning. This was beautiful. It's just so honest and plays with the reader's emotions. All of the references to the music and acting ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Weather

    Hello Nargles! As the World Cup Review Day has begun, I'm here to review, review, review for the Commonwealth team! This poem, while I'll never entirely understand something so deep, ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Spring

    Hello! The World Review Cup just started recently and I'm here to lend a hand to the Commonwealth, and to you! First things first, I want to commend you for ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Horror Re: Roses and Chocolate

    I really like this! Being a girl isn't always just about doing those prissy silly and frivolous things we do sometimes. It's also about gritting our teeth and living through ...

    Dec 21, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fanfiction Re: Hayffie- After Mockingjay

    Wow. That's an interesting take on the story. It's a creative back story for Effie to have. I never would have guessed that she was from district twelve or that ...

    Dec 21, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: Just a message to people who judge themselves unfairly.

    .......thanks. I feel loved. Lots of people will be blessed by this open-armed acceptance. I think I'm fat. I think I'm ugly. I think I'm never going to be thin ...

    Dec 21, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Cutter

    Hello there xDarkHeart27x! It's me, The Yubster! This poem really helped me. I have a close friend who recently opened up to me about their cutting. She's cut herself so ...

    Dec 21, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: My Screams Don't Carry Through the Pages

    Wow! This is really beautiful! It has so much emotion! I feel like I am that character, just a puppet on some strings being jerked around. I'm going to be ...

    Dec 13, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Twisted

    Hello! This isn't going to be much of a review, but I just really wanted to comment. This is really good, but like everything, it can use some polishing. I ...

    Nov 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Who Am I?

    I really liked this! I liked how it kept you guessing through-out the entire poem. It had a perfect size, perfect descriptions, and just an amazing idea. This poem was ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: inequitable power

    Aptitude: aptitude noun 1. a natural ability to do something. "children with an aptitude for painting and drawing" Volatile: Volatile adjective 1. (of a substance) easily evaporated at normal temperat

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Still Here

    Hello! You tear me to pieces. How do they tear you to pieces? With what? It hurts, right? Who is the person tearing you apart? Shred me to bits. As ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: .

    Oh man. That's actually really scary. It took me a while to figure out the implications, but....oh man.... I like how you added the part about him not being in ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Farewell

    Hello! Guess what? I'm back again! People might think that I'm stalking you because of how many times I reviewed your work toady...I assure you, it's only that I love ...

    Nov 24, 2013


Find wonder in the everyday, find everyday language to articulate it.
— Maurice Manning