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Re: Random, Pretentious and Deliberately Ambiguous Questions
Hey there BloodInk! I've been seeing you around the site more and more lately and decided to come and check out some of your works. The title grabbed me. Anything ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Play
To quote MysteryMe: Wow.... honestly, this is stunning. This was beautiful. It's just so honest and plays with the reader's emotions. All of the references to the music and acting ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Weather
Hello Nargles! As the World Cup Review Day has begun, I'm here to review, review, review for the Commonwealth team! This poem, while I'll never entirely understand something so deep, ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Spring
Hello! The World Review Cup just started recently and I'm here to lend a hand to the Commonwealth, and to you! First things first, I want to commend you for ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Roses and Chocolate
I really like this! Being a girl isn't always just about doing those prissy silly and frivolous things we do sometimes. It's also about gritting our teeth and living through ...
Dec 21, 2013 -
Re: Hayffie- After Mockingjay
Wow. That's an interesting take on the story. It's a creative back story for Effie to have. I never would have guessed that she was from district twelve or that ...
Dec 21, 2013 -
Re: Just a message to people who judge themselves unfairly.
.......thanks. I feel loved. Lots of people will be blessed by this open-armed acceptance. I think I'm fat. I think I'm ugly. I think I'm never going to be thin ...
Dec 21, 2013 -
Re: Cutter
Hello there xDarkHeart27x! It's me, The Yubster! This poem really helped me. I have a close friend who recently opened up to me about their cutting. She's cut herself so ...
Dec 21, 2013 -
Re: My Screams Don't Carry Through the Pages
Wow! This is really beautiful! It has so much emotion! I feel like I am that character, just a puppet on some strings being jerked around. I'm going to be ...
Dec 13, 2013 -
Re: Twisted
Hello! This isn't going to be much of a review, but I just really wanted to comment. This is really good, but like everything, it can use some polishing. I ...
Nov 27, 2013 -
Re: Who Am I?
I really liked this! I liked how it kept you guessing through-out the entire poem. It had a perfect size, perfect descriptions, and just an amazing idea. This poem was ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: inequitable power
Aptitude: aptitude noun 1. a natural ability to do something. "children with an aptitude for painting and drawing" Volatile: Volatile adjective 1. (of a substance) easily evaporated at normal temperat
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Still Here
Hello! You tear me to pieces. How do they tear you to pieces? With what? It hurts, right? Who is the person tearing you apart? Shred me to bits. As ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: .
Oh man. That's actually really scary. It took me a while to figure out the implications, but....oh man.... I like how you added the part about him not being in ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Farewell
Hello! Guess what? I'm back again! People might think that I'm stalking you because of how many times I reviewed your work toady...I assure you, it's only that I love ...
Nov 24, 2013
