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  • Poetry » Other, Narrative
    Re: Scrambled

    Hey, whatchamacallit! I haven't reviewed much in a long time, but this poem caught my eye. Okay, so right at the start, I'm scrolling through the poetry feed, and your ...

    May 29, 2020

  • Poetry » Science Fiction, General
    Re: Gears

    Hey Starlit! This is my first review in like five years, so I'm sorry if I'm rusty. I love the use of lowercase letters in this poem. I love the ...

    May 29, 2020

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor
    Re: these threads were destined to unravel

    Hi there niteowl :) This is really deep. Never had I ever thought about the profound feelings of forgotten socks. This has changed me deep inside, in a place where ...

    Apr 26, 2015

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Spiritual
    Re: Lion of Judah

    I was listening to some songs while choosing what to review. I'd just selected The Roar by Chris Tomlin. One of the lines of the chorus contain the words Lion ...

    Mar 28, 2015

  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic
    Re: Until you die

    Just a Cut Just a Scratch "What's that mark?" "It was just a cat" Just an excuse Just another lie "What's with all the bracelets?" "Just fashion, why?" Just a ...

    Feb 16, 2015

  • Other » Narrative, Horror
    Re: Not every one gets a second chance

    Hello, and Happy Halloween! This is yubbies21 here to give you a review! :) First off, this left me hanging. It was too short, too simple. I wanted something that ...

    Oct 31, 2014

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual
    Re: It is well.

    Hey! Is this poem based on the old hymn "It is Well With My Soul" by Horacio G. Spafford? If so, this is my favorite hymn of all time. I ...

    Sep 28, 2014

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: The Teacher

    Hello! I'm here to review this for @ThereseCricket, since she hasn't reviewed Sonnets before :) I haven't much either, but I know the basics, so here goes nothing! Wish me ...

    Jul 11, 2014

  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic
    Re: Creations

    Hello! Happy Review Day! This poem hits right at the heart. It talks of how you may have created evil from a first laugh because of your own evil nature. ...

    Jun 29, 2014

  • Other » Humor, Other
    Re: Book Report on Emily of New Moon

    Hello! Happy Review Day! I like the idea behind this work. While, I understand that it is meant to be humorous, I had trouble keeping up with it. It seemed ...

    Jun 28, 2014

  • Other » Satire, Romantic
    Re: To My Ex

    I seriously don't know why so many people are hating on this piece! It tells a story unique in itself. Saying that you "still" hate someone says that there is ...

    Feb 4, 2014

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: My Name Is Kyle Chapter 1

    Hello! I really liked this story. It was well-written all the way through and had a believable plot-line. I felt like the characters were real, and you did a good ...

    Jan 11, 2014

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Oh Night

    Hello fortis! First off, let me just say, I'm a huge fan of your work! It's Yubbies here for a review! Comparing the colors of the light is a beautiful ...

    Dec 29, 2013

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: A Wish

    Awwww! Now I want to go cry, it's so happy. It's Yubbies here to give a review! The rhyme scheme, while it is choppy in some places, is cute and ...

    Dec 29, 2013

  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General
    Re: The Sister of the Keepers

    Hello Gigi! Just thought I'd drop by for a review! Just found a few quick nit-picks: The last time I saw my brothers ,step brothers actually, was seven years ago. ...

    Dec 28, 2013


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