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  • Poetry » Other, Narrative Re: Scrambled

    Hey, whatchamacallit! I haven't reviewed much in a long time, but this poem caught my eye. Okay, so right at the start, I'm scrolling through the poetry feed, and your ...

    May 29, 2020
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, General Re: Gears

    Hey Starlit! This is my first review in like five years, so I'm sorry if I'm rusty. I love the use of lowercase letters in this poem. I love the ...

    May 29, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: these threads were destined to unravel

    Hi there niteowl :) This is really deep. Never had I ever thought about the profound feelings of forgotten socks. This has changed me deep inside, in a place where ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: Lion of Judah

    I was listening to some songs while choosing what to review. I'd just selected The Roar by Chris Tomlin. One of the lines of the chorus contain the words Lion ...

    Mar 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic Re: Until you die

    Just a Cut Just a Scratch "What's that mark?" "It was just a cat" Just an excuse Just another lie "What's with all the bracelets?" "Just fashion, why?" Just a ...

    Feb 17, 2015
  • Other » Narrative, Horror Re: Not every one gets a second chance

    Hello, and Happy Halloween! This is yubbies21 here to give you a review! :) First off, this left me hanging. It was too short, too simple. I wanted something that ...

    Oct 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: It is well.

    Hey! Is this poem based on the old hymn "It is Well With My Soul" by Horacio G. Spafford? If so, this is my favorite hymn of all time. I ...

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Teacher

    Hello! I'm here to review this for @ThereseCricket, since she hasn't reviewed Sonnets before :) I haven't much either, but I know the basics, so here goes nothing! Wish me ...

    Jul 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Creations

    Hello! Happy Review Day! This poem hits right at the heart. It talks of how you may have created evil from a first laugh because of your own evil nature. ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Other » Humor, Other Re: Book Report on Emily of New Moon

    Hello! Happy Review Day! I like the idea behind this work. While, I understand that it is meant to be humorous, I had trouble keeping up with it. It seemed ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Other » Satire, Romantic Re: To My Ex

    I seriously don't know why so many people are hating on this piece! It tells a story unique in itself. Saying that you "still" hate someone says that there is ...

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: My Name Is Kyle Chapter 1

    Hello! I really liked this story. It was well-written all the way through and had a believable plot-line. I felt like the characters were real, and you did a good ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Oh Night

    Hello fortis! First off, let me just say, I'm a huge fan of your work! It's Yubbies here for a review! Comparing the colors of the light is a beautiful ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: A Wish

    Awwww! Now I want to go cry, it's so happy. It's Yubbies here to give a review! The rhyme scheme, while it is choppy in some places, is cute and ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: The Sister of the Keepers

    Hello Gigi! Just thought I'd drop by for a review! Just found a few quick nit-picks: The last time I saw my brothers ,step brothers actually, was seven years ago. ...

    Dec 29, 2013


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— Ron Swanson (Parks and Rec)