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Re: My Dark Angel: part of chapter 1
This backstory is highly relatable to mine. My mom always saw my dad in me growing up as well. The internal problems with the protagonist are just a few to ...
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Re: A Mental Push And One Cut
You really wrote your heart out on this one. I admire deep poetry such as this. The deprivation of a connection can lead two people to feel as strangers. Keep ...
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Re: Heatwave and Heartache
I absolutely adore this piece, though my heart aches with empathy. Love can be beautiful but yet tragic and haunting when it doesn't favor our way. What's meant to be ...
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Re: Normal
Hey Alex, first of all while reading this I thought you would be quite fun to collab with. I like your structure here, and the points are like a bullet ...
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Re: from her to eternity
This is beautifully packed full with such abstract phrases as "the porch light and bruising knees", "folding boats" and so on. The mentioning of finding solace in someone is the ...
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Re: One runs the risk of crying a bit if one allows oneself to be tamed.
I love this so much. I've always thought some horses were meant to roam free and wild. Why break their spirits? This reminds me of just that. It breaks my ...
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Re: Untitled
Oh my gosh wow I absolutely love this. The ending brings such positivity and self growth while adding a fable in there of defining oneself. I just as well agree ...
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Re: When you tell me to brush my tangled hair
Young, carefree and wild at heart, this reminds me so much of myself and even my daughter. There's so many more things important on this earth than brushing through my ...
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Re: Tick Tock
This shatters my heart to acknowledge that there are people in this world with absolutely nothing to offer but a simplicity to trade for a bed or food. No one ...
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Re: I am nothing more than the birth of ruin.
This is so neatly and compactly woven with so many ideas noted in each stanza. The imagery is unique with talented wordplay and bright philosophy until reaching the end and ...
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Re: Alanna’s origin
This one definitely takes a different turn of events than what I had expected. This takes Romeo and Juliet meeting jaws to a frightening new level. The history of the ...
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Re: Claudia of the sea
Wow how did you come up with this?? A girl with everything at her feet is so steadily sleepy with her life that she'd rather become a pirate and loot ...
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Re: Fading Loveletters
Oh my gosh I just have to know more from this story. This is so heartbreaking, but I'm so drawn in. The unsent letter raises suspicions on what exactly was ...
Apr 24, 2025 -
Re: Writing From a Desk in the Dark: Chapter 4
I love every bit of this from the emotions towards her to finding and creating a new friendship. Your bohemian style reminds me so much of myself. That's my favorite ...
Apr 24, 2025 -
Re: El (A Hunter x Hunter story) chapters 10-14
Wow this is such an intensively thrilling story. It had me on the edge of my seat reading. As the dream turns to nightmare, I'm flooding thoughts of what is ...
Apr 24, 2025
