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Hey there yizhongt here to leave a review, I am not too familiar with the SG Atlantis storyline so please forgive me in advance if I happen to make any ...

Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. This is an interesting story, but you have a number of grammatical corrections to make. Let us be " What do you ...

Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a quick review. I didn't read the first part of the story, nonetheless I really enjoyed the story. The story flowed well and I ...

Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. Let me just get this out of the way and say that the beginning of the story started somewhat exactly as how ...

Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. I really liked this chapter of your story, and even though I have not read the previous chapters, I can say you ...

Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. I must say that this is a very well written chapter you've got here. The words you used to describe the setting ...

Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. Even though I haven't read the earlier chapters of this yet, I still very much enjoyed reading this chapter. I'll most probably ...

Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. I must say you have a really good story in your hand. It was an enjoyable read. The way you have built ...

This is an excellent first chapter and a magnificent start to a novel that is going to be awesome. You've got me hooked. I loved the whole backdrop of the ...

Hey LordofLit, welcome back ! Its been a long time and I've been waiting for this chapter to come out for ages. You have another good chapter here, it was ...

Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. I must say you have a really engaging science fiction story here. The descriptions you have given to your story is really ...

Hey Chaser, yizhongt here to leave review. The story is moving along brilliantly. This chapter along with the ones before it are exceptionally good. What I loved about this chapter ...

Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. I've not read the previous chapters, but after I read this chapter, I would be checking out the two earlier chapters. I ...

Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review on this review day. I really like the descriptions you give when it comes to the surroundings as well as the character's ...

Hey hunith, yizhongt here to give a review. Sardonyx has already gone over all the grammar and sentence structure errors, and I think you have already fixed them, so I ...