xxFleetingEternity

I love haikus, and these are beautiful-- very poetic. Although they state outright what they are, I think it works much better that way. In haikus, I feel it is ...

...wow. That's all I can really say. Well, I could also say reviewing's troublesome- but this piece deserves it. It was brilliantly written, especially with the language you used. You ...

This is a beautiful poem- it paints a clear picture, but at the same time, is a bit hazy. I notice also that you don't have a rhyme scheme, but ...

First off, it's a expressive poem, but the way it's written just isn't doing it for me. The first stanza doesn't make sense; look over it again. I can point ...

(Sorry, I kind of suck at reviewing, just so you know.) So I know that I didn't review the first chapter, and I'm sorry for that. But, I am going ...

The way you have broken up the text is interesting. It makes the poem more detailed, more unique, even though you didn't seem to have a specific pattern with the ...

I really enjoyed this poem, it was quite different, and slightly amusing. I think my favorite line was "Our very reality, is illusion, of what we think and know." Very ...

Take back what I said on the first sentence. I read it wrong originally. My mistake.

Okay. Honestly? I actually kind of like this. It's darker, and very true. You got onto the other side of the scenario; where we usually hear about the case, or ...

Must say, the title of the poem is what caught my eye in the first place. (winks) And I'm glad it did. This poem was beautifully written. I very much ...

This is great. The sheer darkness combined with the hilarity of the poem makes for a very entertaining read. (Even if it is only poetry...) The repetition used (ex: first ...