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hey there. this is really a good poem. i'm going through the same situation and yes,what i can't take is silence. good job and keep writing. :)

love this very much! but i think the line You're bright light... should be written as Your? :) but this is great!

what a cold boyfriend. :p

This is a good piece. I liked it very much. I have nothing to comment cause it sounds perfectly fine for me. :D Keep writing!

and a funeral held in your name This is my favorite line. :D

You should make it longer. Nice story line by the way! :)

I would tell that everyone could relate so much with your poem because I'm feeling this loneliness thing too. Therefore,I love your poem! :D

I loved it. Well for me,it is very well written. Keep writing! :)

Hey! That was a very helpful review. I will inform you if I make any changes, but I'll stick to this for a moment. I wanted to get more reviews/helps ...

Another helpful review! I wouldn't realize I was using too much of unnecessary words till you mentioned that. Try to minimize it next time. Thank you! :)

I loved it. You have brilliant ideas and words and I loved the ending of your poem as well.

Hey! Thanks for the review. It was a helpful review to know my errors. :D And thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate it. xoxo

yes,i showed this to a friend and she seemingly couldn't understand the flow of my poem. and yep,the content is dark. coz i read too much of gothic poetry. it's ...