writingaway

I'm not commenting on the poem itself I am more commenting on the actual words... I cannot hide that I'm a woman, though you've no idea how I've tried. There's ...

Sorry, a five letter word, Carried so much feeling, once in this world. Sorry, this five letter word, Now its nothing, but just a word. This stanza is very strong ...

Hello, I am going to review your poem. Red- corrections/errors/opinions My life be like a theme park.. 'be' should be 'is'. im bein fo serious. Are you trying to say ...

I really liked this poem also. You brought it to a whole new level with your willingness to go in more depth with the emotions. The adjectives and descriptions of ...

Hello, I am going to review your poetry. RED- corrections/opinions/errors etc. Your hair is messy like confused rain. It drives me mad as water in my ears would. i think ...

To be completely honest I didn't really get the point you and your friends were trying to make and show the readers.. To me you all made sentences just so ...

Hello, I am going to review your work today. Red- corrections/errors/opinions You may have the perfect hair, You may have the teeth, You might have the perfect air And grace, ...

Wow, this poetry was very appealing. I understood where you are coming from as I also am a fan of the Harry Potter books and movies.. This inspired me to ...

THIS is really GOOD! I can definitely relate to the whole thing. Also it kind of made me wonder what the background to this was. You could of gone on ...

Hello I am going to review your poem; (red is corrections, opinions etc) "I don't care," You say, As if you Not caring Makes it better. Makes it all go ...

I liked this short story a lot. Although at some parts i couldn't quite get the point across. Altogether i did like it though, but it wasn't one of the ...

Overall I did like this poem. Although there are some improvements you could use; -some times it seems as if you force your rhymes -spelling errors etc. -capitalism needs some ...

WOW, this story really caught my eye. For some reason i can relate to this story. You used descriptions well, and also capitalism etc. The only think i could say ...

Hello,I am going to review your poem. This poem to me actually reminded me of the other day when I was trying to get my friend to come out to ...

Hello I will be reviewing your poem today. Well I read your poem and I did enjoy it although could use some improvements in the following areas: -Commas, fullstops etc. ...