writerwithacause

My mother always said ‘No rest for the wicked’, pertaining to having to make sure a five-year-old, hyper-active, troublemaker Diana Justice never got hurt too badly. She still says it ...

This was such a great idea: combining more haiku's into one single poem. Wonderful! I just have to say, I enjoyed reading this so much. No mistakes to point out, ...

Have you ever heard an angel 's cry, --either "an angel's cry, or "an angel crying" while it sang its mournful tune? It shatters more than glass and stone, but ...

Stumbling into the cold bathroom, ("Stumble" would rather be an imperative, if accompanied by no pronoun) distressed; tired from today. My reflection stares down into me. Fierce. Hard eyes give ...

Pieces of my soul, scatter e d to point the way. Parts of me, my life, freshly hung each day. Myself, bared to the world, with everything to show and ...

Hey there, Snionk! I like this. I admit I haven't read it entirely, I will add it to my reading list... but I enjoyed it up till now. You write ...

The air always held a gray ambience. A rusty scent lingered on every corner and through every street. The sky affected the people. Sons were drafted and taken from families, ...

There’s nothing more relaxing Than laying on the almost-green grass , Watching flowers bloom Under an early-spring sun . Little tulip buds sway In the cool breeze . They're about ...

Out of the corner of my eye, I see you. In the depths of my heart, I need you. Off the tip of my tongue, I don't know what to ...

Hey there, Reebz! Your poem was nice and easy/enjoyable to read. However, you have some spelling/vocabulary mistakes. Here they are, I've written them in bold the way they should be: ...

k I realize now how long it took to fall for you. It took me a single glance to understand -- "understand" seems more fitting how important you would become, ...

It's coming for you -- the quick but moveless beast , like a hand grab b ing your soul it pulls you to the other side of the the darkness. ...

Just close your soul Disregard the passing lies It's safer if you just stay dead Nevertheless, come be alive It's dangerous to feel the joy Because depression is it's brother ...

You can't use indents, because the code that forums use is BB Code. BB Code, unlike HTML, does not have a tag or anything that would allow you to use ...

My heart races as music starts to sound I know the rhyme would've been affected, but the verb "play" would've been more suitable. If you could find a word for ...