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Hi! I'm going to review part 2 of your story during review day (at some point), so I figured I'd better start here! :) First of all, your hook. I ...

Oh, this is gorgeous. Had to get that out of the way before I said anything else. Even hi. And, now that I'm here, hi HolographicLadybug (who has an awesome ...

Hi, @myjaspercat! I'm here to review! Let's take a look at your poem, shall we? First of all, I love how you started with a quote. While a small detail ...

Hi! I quite like this poem you have; it's sweet and an experience I can relate to (Really, who can deny Girl Scout Cookies? They are incredibly expensive, but I ...

Hello! This was an interesting poem; it seemed very satirical in a way that I couldn't quite figure out. Although this is an AU, so that may be why. I ...

Hello! Anna here, ready to review! So, let's start out by looking at your poem's meanings and moods. Oh think mood is very important in this poem, especially since it ...

Hi! Let's take a look at your poem, shall we? So, as a previous reviewer said, writing poetry about love is HARD. And it is. So, like Rascalover, I do ...

Hello! I really enjoyed your poem, particularly the metaphor of the ice/snow/frostbite (although I think that to make your poem stronger it needs to be integrated more into the idea ...

Hi! Hello! Let's look at what you've written! So, the message of this poem is pretty clear: we all can never measure up to the ideals that society pushes upon ...

Well, I really don't see how my opinion could help here, but I'll try. You've written a fantastic piece that everyone loves! I'm not sure I can help, but I ...

Wow, this is deep! I really don't have much to say; it's straightforward in a way that it doesn't use symbolism, yet still captures my attention and keeps it through ...

Hullo! And can I say wow? This is one of your best ones yet! (Though teenagers will always hold a special place in my heart, I really love those ones). ...

Hello! So...wow. I thoroughly enjoyed this, I have to say, although I'm thankful I'm not at home alone right now. It was the shivers-snake-down-your-spine sort of creepy, meaning that you ...