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Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse
These are absolutely the best books ever! I love them! I got addicted after the first line in Twilight! No Kyte, it's not. It's a love series. THis girl falls ...
Sep 30, 2007 -
Re: A War Worth Fighting For
Thanks. Glad you like it. Also, thanks for the critique. I think this is one of my better pieces. I love heroines instead of heros! Being a girl, I tend ...
Sep 30, 2007 -
Re: Every Little Reminder
I loved this! It is a little vague, but it is really sweet. I think that it describes everything perfectly. The feelings that she's going through and how she found ...
Sep 5, 2007 -
Re: First Kiss (Part 1?)
This was so sweet and romantic I just had to comment! I absolutely loved it! XD. The only thing I found wrong was that it wasn't long enough!!!
Sep 5, 2007 -
Re: First Kiss (Part 1?)
This was so sweet and romantic I just had to comment! I absolutely loved it! XD. The only thing I found wrong was that it wasn't long enough!!!
Sep 5, 2007 -
Re: Conflict With a Confounding Relationship
Well, it was okay. It has a lot of incorrect sentences. And a lot of errors. I just skimmed it. But, I would suggest reading it again. To find all ...
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: My Summer Romance
Thanks all. Like I said, it is all in my head and I need to get it written down first. This was just to see what people thought of it. ...
Aug 21, 2007 -
Re: My Summer Romance
Thanks everybody. ANd Jabber, no you didn't offend me. Your comment, I think, was the nicest. But, I know it stinks. Mainly, I am trying to get the whole story ...
Aug 11, 2007 -
Re: My True Love
Are you trying to make me cry? I love it. It is so sweet! And true. I didn't know you can write poetry! *is sad that she can't, and a ...
Aug 11, 2007 -
Re: A Changeling in Afanadar: Prologue
I see you started a new story! XD I will critique it...but not today. *Sigh* Why do they all have to be so long? Lol. I suppose I owe you ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: Please don't leave
I love this! It is very sweet. I agree. I could be longer. But...that's just me. I like it. XD Keep up the good work. 007
Aug 2, 2007 -
Re: Guardians
Hey. Okay, yes. More reviews. I'm pretty good at that. ;) So...here we go. 1. "When the village council found that her mother, Irene, could spellcast, they broke into the ...
Aug 1, 2007 -
Re: Guardians
I would make a new post or say Revised at the beginning. I am going to review it again! XD I just want to help you become a better writer! ...
Aug 1, 2007 -
Re: Song of the Secret Keepers
XD That's okay. My suggestion would be to read it on YWS after you have posted it to see if everything fits. Just a suggestion. I really like it, but ...
Jul 30, 2007 -
Re: Never Been Kissed
Thank you. SOrry. I haven't checked my work in a while. It was kind of something I just did on a whim. I hadn't really thought about doing anything with ...
Jul 29, 2007
