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  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: education is important

    Sigh.... Why is this so relatable? So, first off, I really like the was you structured this, especially the never ending "education is important" It makes it feel.... Realistic? It ...

    May 21, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Someone Strike The Liberty Bell.

    WOAH 10/10 and @Flumadiddle good job on being good moral support. I don't think I can say much here because everyone has almost said it all. So first off, it's ...

    Jan 26, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: one last card game

    O.m.g. I wanted to review this, but there is just nothing to say. This left me speechless. I love the formatting, I love how you build things up until you ...

    Dec 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Her Name Was Leelah

    Heyy! Wordwing here! I must say, I really like the first two lines. I could imagine exactly how the light shone and the tears reflecting the light. Amazing imagery! I ...

    Dec 30, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Colors

    Hello E.E and Woahh! It sa me, Mario! For a reviovo! I find this to be a very interesting poem. I like the structure, it's something out of the ordinary, ...

    Dec 19, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: The Pain Of Words

    Hi! Wordwing here! This reminds me of the lyrics in Bo Burnam's song- Kill yourself. It goes like this: "Sticks and stones might break your bones but words can break ...

    Dec 13, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Wall vs Love

    Hello Flumadiddle! Wordwinnnnnnng here for a review!(Agh, this intro has gotten boring!) interpretation: This is about you and your bf LordTachanka if I'm not mistaken. The walls simbolise the distanc

    Dec 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: deleted

    Hello! Wordwing here for a review! This.*Gasps* Is.*Breathes in* Beautiful. I love how the rhyme doesn't seem forced at all and you managed to splendidly make it rhyme, but oh, ...

    Nov 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Chapter 5 Muscles are Important

    Hello! Wordwing here for a review! I must say I really like this chapter, even though I haven't read any others, nor do I like romance but that might change ...

    Nov 26, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mark - Part 6 SMSU

    Hello Flumadddle! Wordwing here for a review! So, first of all, I like the poem. It's a nice little acrostic poem but it could be better if you didn't make ...

    Nov 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Other Re: The Great Afdenture Chapter I - The Forest

    Hello! Wordwing here! 1. "Hello person, can me and my friend Tom have some Ice cream," asked Josh Correction: Hello person, can me and my friend Tom have some ice ...

    Nov 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Moonlight: Chapter Three

    Hello! Wordwing here! And I thought I have been rushing. There isn't much to be said anymore, the reviewers before me have already said a lot, but whatever. 1.The rush-Your ...

    Nov 12, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Is This My Doing?

    Hello Flumaddidle! Wordwing here for a review! Warning: This review might be kind of meh because Lightsong already wrote most of what I thought about this poem but I'll write ...

    Nov 9, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: I don't know

    Hello @DawnLight31! I am here for a review. First of all, you seem to have grammar problems. Don't worry though, as it is nothing that can not be fixed. In ...

    Nov 4, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Excerpt 1- Hicksville, NY

    Hello! Wordwing here! Why do I think that this could be a poem? You sure like using all kinds of words don't you? Grammar issues: never should be Never, peoples ...

    Oct 14, 2017


Making the simple complicated is commonplace; making the complicated simple, awesomely simple, that's creativity.
— Charles Mingus