wonderlandashes

I really enjoy this story, and it is an interesting concept that could be expanded upon. I think that making this longer would certainly be beneficial. It is very good ...

So I actually love this poem so much! It's simple, some may even say a bit juvenile, but it really made me happy and amused. I adore the first stanza ...

Hi!! I'm here to write a review. (If I'm repetitive of what others have said, then I'm sorry, I haven't read the previous comments.) So I'll be honest… when I ...

I think that this is a really nice piece and it is super original with the formatting! I really enjoyed it, and yeah, I can relate, haha. You've captured the ...

Hi, its wonderland ashes. Can I just start by saying, I LOVE THIS POEM SO SO SO MUCH! Honestly, how can put it so perfectly like that! The message is ...

Well, I liked the poem, it just wasn't what I was expecting to read. However, the concept is brilliant. The flow is also very good, although maybe the rhythm in ...

Hi, its wonderland ashes. This poem is honestly one of the best I've ever read. Usually when I review things, I like to have constructive criticism. But honestly, with this, ...

Hello, I'm going to review this piece. I know. I'm so unpredictable. I think that the message is nice. However, the rhythm is pretty uneven, and it would really make ...

That is absolutely beautiful. The only thing I can suggest now is to just write a tune if you haven't already. It is so heartfelt and though personal, I know ...

Hi, it's Wonderland Ashes. I like your piece, it sort of reminds me of Demons by Imagine Dragons. I love that song, by the way, so that's a compliment from ...