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  • Poetry » Narrative, Horror Re: A Haunting Lullaby

    Hey there, Haven235! This poem is really interesting to me. I love that the whole time I am not entirely sure why the speaker is so afraid or why he/she ...

    Feb 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Will Return!

    Interesting poem, anshira! I wasn't really expecting the ending part! i really enjoyed that poem and the unknown of what the attacker was going to do, and how it was ...

    Dec 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Beautiful Tragedy

    Hello NightCrawler! It is I wolverene13! And I really enjoyed this poem! I totally agree on all the things you put into it, even though it is for a school ...

    Dec 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Musing of Words

    i really like the point of this poem. i love that you are trying to show that not all darkness will forever be in the shadows and I really like ...

    Dec 31, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Cat

    Haiku! I enjoy writing haikus and this one is very good. When I read it it kind of makes me laugh just because of how much it reminded me of ...

    Jul 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dreams and Feelings

    This is definitely unique to what I have read before. I've never read a poem with constant rhyming for almost the whole poem except for one line. That's very unique. ...

    Jul 24, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ruins

    This poem is very intriguing and I like that it makes the reader feel the emotions of the writer. You give so many metaphors and images that the reader can ...

    Jul 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: The War

    So Hello! Just start off I'm not a very good reviewer! I know people like knit pick and stuff and that's great, but I stink at checking stuff so I'm ...

    Jul 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Fanfiction Re: Silent.

    This poem is great. I didn't really know what to expect since your description was "a poem about silence". I guess I expected a poem of awe and philosophy or ...

    Jul 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fragrant Rose

    I like how your first two stanzas are tied in to nature and rather than using similes you said "you are..." using a metaphor which for me at least sometimes ...

    Jul 22, 2014


I wondered why we put villains in our stories when we have plenty of them in real life; then I realized that maybe we wanted stories where the good guy wins.
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