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Hey RedRage, first of all I love this. Most people will rarely do a take on the knife itself and not its usage and how it is being used. I ...

Hey crobbins, first of all this is completely spoken from the heart. It is very relatable and a concept and situation that I think a large majority of us struggle ...

All I can think as soon as I read this I think "oh wow". it has such a dark tone to it at first then when you realize how the ...

First of all, this is beautiful and heartbreaking, it pulls you in then hits you in the heart. secondly you have a few errors that i spotted. Even though you ...

First I will critique then praise... you have a fair amount of minor grammar the second line there should be a hyphen(-) between lie and cracked, in line 8 you ...

This is awesome!!! My first thought was "write LOL" until I remembered that they don't like texting language on here. So anyways, I digress, this is funny, straight to the ...

Aliceafternoon, For a first time doing a poem with rhyme, this is pretty good. There are a few things that you may want to fix such as in the second ...

This is super deep. It forces the problems of this world to the front of a person's mind where they have to face them and see whats wrong. Now for ...

This is really beautiful in its own way. I love how you relate everything to light- the moon's light, the light of a phone screen, ect. This provides a good ...