winterstar

I've got one thing to say and one thing to say only. And I hope you take what I say to heart. PUT THIS TO MUSIC!!!! If you're not a ...

Definitely an interesting perspective on Annabel Lee. Never would have thought to consider her point of view. I do have a few critiques about the form (structure) of it. If ...

Why did you end it with "was"? Shouldn't your character say "Life is good"? Okay, that was the first thing that popped out at me as I finished reading it. ...

Dude, I want this to be at the front of the last book of my trilogy! Very potent, and it speaks to the topics I will be writing about. I ...

Wow! Very good use of imagery. I could clearly see this picture in my mind's eye. The structure, rhyme, and meter actually are similar to some of the poetic greats ...

My first thoughts after I finished the first line were, "Okay, this feels like Robert Frost's poem 'The Road Not Taken.'" When I finished the poem, my thoughts were similar ...

Is the girl in this story significantly younger than the guy? If the guy has the foresight to say such poetic lines to her, it seems that he'd have had ...

It sounds like a child wrote this letter. If this person was really in love with this guy she's writing to, she would probably take more time to write in ...