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Hey there! I'm Onyx and I will be reviewing your poem today! :D So lets get to it. I love the poem, I can feel the emotion behind it and ...

Hey there! I'm Onyx and I'm here to review the lovely poem. I have to say, I was a bit confused at the title of your poem. After reading it, ...

Hey there! I'm here to review, so here we go! ^.^ Comments So, about the dream at the beginning. I didn't know that was a dream 'til I read a ...

Hey there! I am going to be reviewing your poem for today! So here we go. Comments “Distance is a dying breed”, they preach This might just be a "me" ...

Hey there! I'm here to review your poem. So let's get started! Comments We're gonna murder her money Here, for me, it sounds a bit weird. While reading through the ...

Hey there! Knight Onyx is here to review! So let's get this party started! ^^ Comments Okay, so far I am liking it a lot! This is my first time ...

Hey there NightWolf! Knight Onyx is here to review! :D Nice to meet you, by the way. I am a doctor who fan! Oh my! *hearts* Over All Alright! Love ...

Hey there! Knight Onyx here to review after a long extended break. Ha- Alright, I love the sweet and simplicity of the poem. I like how you tell about the ...

Hey there! Knight Onyx is here to review your lovely poem. :) Comments This is just a thing I saw that really stood out as I was reading throughout the ...

Hey there! I'm Knight Onyx from the KotGR. I will be reviewing your poem today! :D Comments The poem is sort of small, though any size of poem can still ...

Oh? I like the name of this chapter... I wonder if something bad happens... :O Exciting! :D Comments “Hello? Is this Dr Paul?” Alright, you have to put a period ...

Hey! I'm back and so excited. You completely threw me off of what I was expecting... You are so awesome! Comments Nothing big on the grammar, just two things. :D ...

Hey there! Told you I would get some of these done! Ha- just got back from driving in the horrid rain storm... I thought I was going to die! Anyways, ...

Hey there! Knight Onyx here to review your lovely poem! :D Comments Nothing big, I didn't find anything grammatically wrong. Just a thing or two that I really, really liked. ...

Back! I'm back in the new groooooove! xD I think that is how the song goes.... Oh well. Comments Again, just a few comments. Your grammar is better and better ...