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for the record, "Hostess™ hostess" is intended first as Hostess the pastry company, and then hostess...like an escort (read as: prostitute :p) and ™ is a trademark

Results 1 - 10 of about 11,700 for "I think of you from time to time". (0.12 seconds) Try a refrain with a smidgen more original thought.

This is a manifestation of popculture-induced incompetence. Put down your nearest Mainstream rap source and do something productive with your life.

I'm certain I've gotten a chain-mail message that was nearly word-for-word to this... :/

I still owe you a crit of this! Don't let me forget :D

I think I can speak well on the subject because I actually took the time to read both Eragon and Eldest, and I approached them with an open mind. *throwsup ...

could be a dystopian setting, I suppose. But not at all in my tastes..

gah, sorry. The edits keep getting messed up... I'm not sure why... But I've done a re-re-edit, and hopefully it'll stick this time.

edited! I hope I fixed the POV issues, thanks for the crits :)

"Death.....Now" Intriguing, Yeah, cut out those and what's in between. All the best, Ed (Note to anyone who knows anything: :D)

Zee>> Yes it is. Oh, and I believe 'omniscience' is the word you're looking for xD Firestalker>> Yes, well... I tend to be ambiguous and abstract in my poems, but ...

Aghh. Is this past or present tense? Because at the moment, I'm killing myself trying to figure it out. Please, pick one and go through and edit it accordingly.

Most of you sound ridiculous. You are all looking at the poem from the wrong perspective. NONE of this was forced rhyming. I'm looking at it from a reader's perspective. ...

ok, you might think it a cop-out, but I liked the was just too ambiguous. Now, hopefully with the new title it'll be clearer.

Hahaha, never mind. I'd misread this part: "He had told me he loved me everyday since Rocco’s decease. " My bad. It makes a lot more sense now ;) As ...