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wow....that's.....deep I believe that a person should write what every they feel and it's only true if it comes from them. This is a perfect poem.

My first impression is that this poem doesnt really speak to me but it is very well put together and runs through perfectly. I like it keep it up

that was really good. try either spacing evenly or putting a little less space between the different parts though it just looked a little strange

The lines don't seem to run together very smoothly. I know some people who sit and read a poem that they wrote to themselves (out loud) a couple of times ...

ok.....i get this but it stops so suddenly and took me a while to get the last to lines and figure out how they went together

this is really good. and really true. but it starts out so suddenly it took me a reading it a couple of times to get it.

ok...what?

this is good......but u'll and till arent words its you'll and 'till or untill

this is good.....but not at all true......they would have a reason to fight....

ok that last one is sort of stupid and made no sense but the first one is a good idea just make it like 5 times longer and you'll be ...

i like the last one but the first one kind of.....rhymes to much

i really like the first two lines and i think this is really good....but it stops a bit suddenly

this is good....but you lost me at the 4th line

i really like this...but it doesnt make much sense

i really like this....and it makes alot of sense........