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Okie dokie, this poem was full of raw emotion, and excellent descriptions. I loved it :). The only thing that threw me off was the constant changing rhyme scheme, that ...

Alright, so honestly, I didn't understand this poem at all. It felt kind of choppy to me, which forced my attention away from the meaning of the poem. So I'm ...

I really liked this poem :). It was long, and I normally get bored with long poems, but this one was able to keep my attention. The rhythm was actually ...

Kay so I really liked this, and being really into rap and hip-hop myself, I was able to perfectly form this in my head as a song, which is really ...

This is a really good poem :). The only problem I see is the punctuation. When there is no punctuation, people can do one of two things: They can read ...

GAH Okay, so this is good.....But it's a bit all over the place and there is NO punctuation......Rookie mistake. Here's how I'd fix it: The beauty of the world Put ...

So I like the start, but I'm having trouble relating. Maybe the poem just isn't for me, and that's why I'm having trouble relating, but these are my suggestions: I ...

I really liked this poem, and for something with an uncommon meter and no rhyme scheme like this, that doesn't get typed into my keyboard often :). I really liked ...

So, I read a lot of poetry, so I understood what this meant, but it is very confusing. It's good, and has potential, but it's just the outline of a ...

I really liked this poem, and think it's great as it is :). The only critiques I have are: The silver moon shone his light to an endless infinite ride ...

I really liked this story, it was sad, happy, and cute all in one. It was informative, and to the point, and put a great deal of information into a ...

That was absolutely beautiful, and translated so well I was absolutely amazed. You definitely have an amazing English-Spanish ability here and I'm curious what you could do if you combined ...

I love this. I love the fact that the mean theme, the main point of the poem isn't revealed until the very last line (or the second to last if ...

I liked the general impression of the poem, it has a lot of potential, even though it is very sad and pessimistic. This is my advice: Telephone wires slice the ...

I liked the twist at the end of how you put the lines together in an order that changed the meaning completely. However, you could work a bit on the ...