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I love the poem, great great great job, but some stuff did throw me off. Check your meter, a few of the lines are just a beat or two too ...

I liked the ending of the poem a lot, the last stanza had a bunch of emotion and was really great, there are a few things I see though that ...

Alright, starting out with this poem it is absolutely great, but I do think it could be even better. I love the first few stanzas, and I love how you ...

Alright, I did like the poem, but I have some pointers, hope they're helpful :) some have already been mentioned. Maybe I was the girl to shy to be loved ...

I am kind of on the fence with this poem, I like it, but I don't really get it. I love vague poetry, I love having to guess at things ...

I like the poem, and it touches a topic I've been very aware of for a while. I do have some things I'd like to mention but they are more ...

I love the poem, even though it's not anything within what I would normally read or write. It seems to have a touch of originality to it that makes it ...

I sort of like this poem in a way, but it's too vague, and I'm not one to say that as I love vague poetry that leaves the imagination to ...

Overall this is a great poem, though I do have a few comments on it that I would like to make. First off, though I love constant rhyming as much ...

1) when did you write this and why didn't you show it to me? 2) great poem but I have to say, IT'S OKAY TO NOT HAVE SUCH A FLAWLESS ...

Sickness to insanity I question my humanity. My decaying family, Is all but what remains. - Knifes into my weakened mind On excavations set to find All that we had ...

Alright, first off I lose the poem from the start, the rhyming actually surprisingly doesn't seem forced and that's great.....but: "A symbol of power cannot be loaned This juggernaut must ...

I love this poem, but I do have a few minor suggestions to make the poem flow a little better: Cold eyes knew that they wouldn’t dare, true, but the ...

I like the gist of the poem, it basically seems to me like a story of a person who is hiding feelings. But one thing that doesn't quite fit is ...

Trapped in my world which I despise, Wide awake with wide open eyes. As I wonder under the stars HEY CUTIE!! :P This is what I'd do: Trapped in my ...