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Re: A Habitual Criminal Speaks
Hey there, hope in for a quick review! I may not be the great reviewer around here, but I'll do my best as I am still learning. If there is ...
Jan 30, 2018 -
Re: Singing birds
Hey ya, Dropping by here for a quick review, I may not be the best writer or grammar nazi or the best reviewer, but I'll have a short review on ...
Jan 30, 2018 -
Re: One
Hey ya, Dropping by here for a quick review, I may not be the best writer or grammar nazi or the best reviewer, but I'll have a short review on ...
Jan 30, 2018 -
Re: Solid as the Rock of Gibralter!
Hey ya, Dropping by here for a quick review, I may not be the best writer or grammar nazi or the best reviewer, but I'll have a short review on ...
Jan 30, 2018 -
Re: There Once Was a Dragon
Hey there ChieRynn! Here for a quick review ( I hope so ) I like dragons, but Toothless? He's a creature made in the fire of heaven! If there is ...
Oct 1, 2017 -
Re: Girl of Fire and Brimstone (Part 3)
Wendy is here for a review. again. death in his hands and left despair in his wake. (it was both death in part 2) And, once upon a time, there ...
Sep 26, 2017 -
Re: Girl of Fire and Brimstone (Part 2)
Hello, Wendy is here for a review on the second, I promise this time will be a quite review! She covers her turmoils with a smile. it's more suitable because ...
Sep 26, 2017 -
Re: Girl of Fire and Brimstone (Part 1)
Hello AliceinBlue! Wendy is here for a quick (I hope) review! If there is anything that you hightlighted/disagree/disapprove/dislike in my review, feel free to comment or PM me. or if ...
Sep 25, 2017 -
Re: The Boy Who Cried Wolf
Hello, I'm here for a review. If there any inquiry, feel free to comment below. The introduction of this short stories is not strong enough, the first paragraph was just ...
Sep 17, 2017 -
Re: Lady of the Night
Hey! Here for a review. Below are some hugglughted point needed to be pointes out. 1. Palm of the hand. A palm would always indicate the inside of the hand. ...
Sep 16, 2017 -
Re: King's Curse
Lumos, It's me again! The King's Curse is one of my favourite reads. It reminds me of this one movie. I miss watching, going to rewatch it soon. So, I ...
Sep 16, 2017 -
Re: Beast
Hey there Lumos! Here to have a review! I liked how you have done your work, it's straightforward with sufficient description and details. Character backstory, the mood, and settings. But, ...
Sep 16, 2017 -
Re: Trailing Stardust
Hey there Alice, you posted a work on your first-day signup, unlike me...Welcome to YWS. Glad to an enthusiast like you! Below are some comments on phrases that I highlighted. ...
Sep 15, 2017 -
Re: Moon's Whispers [Clary]
Pack? pack???? Lycanthrope? I thought...Are all your stories completely stand-alone, set in a different universe with just same names? Cause, at first it was angels, then demon, then... okay, my ...
Sep 15, 2017 -
Re: Lies Of A Storm
Hey! It's me again! Demons, I thought James was an angel from The Cursed Prophecy, then I thought they were reapers for because they were collecting sold souls. Then they ...
Sep 15, 2017
