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waywardxwanderer

Rain's Overgrown Garden

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: this love is like nicotine withdrawal

    I read through this poem and thought the style seemed a bit familiar... it's very much your style, and it's lovely. I'm in awe of how you've created all of ...

    Apr 30, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: on the creation of us

    This poem is lovely!! Extended metaphors are, in my humble opinion, the VERY BEST literary devices, and this poem did it perfectly!! You've created a small story, a comfortable and ...

    Apr 30, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the post-heartbreak silence

    This poem is short and yet it’s so meaningful and lovely?? It’s absolutely incredible. You’ve really managed to convey the waiting that silent arguments and heartbreak are- sitting by, waiting ...

    Apr 29, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: The Rain Song

    Hello!! I really loved this poem and the way you used imagery to create such cozy and comfortable scenes. The way you began it with the rain beginning and you ...

    Apr 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: an introduction to origami & heartbreak

    I've been meaning to review this for a while because I read it and couldn't get it out of my head. Extended metaphors are, in my opinion, one of the ...

    Apr 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: unintelligible memorandums

    This poem is really beautiful and perfectly broaches the issue faced by people who hurt themselves. As someone with, er, slight experience in this area, this poem really spoke to ...

    Apr 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Poison Wine and Blinding Sins

    This poem is so beautiful and real. I love the dark tone and the way you've brought religion and a sort of pleading into it. It really works to bring ...

    Apr 28, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Paracosmist

    Hi!! This poem is absolutely GORGEOUS. I have a friend with a paracosm and she describes it much like this. This poem has such a beautiful and dreamy style with ...

    Apr 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: questioning

    I absolutely ADORE this!! Your writing style is amazing, and I love how it ebbs and flows from a soft familiarity with the reader to more of a poetic style ...

    Apr 28, 2021
  • Article / Essay » Literature, Culture Re: Highways

    This piece is ,,, stunning. Every time I read something from you I'm astounded at your skill. This piece perfectly sums up the surreal and eerie feeling of road trips ...

    Apr 22, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Will

    This was a really lovely and sweet poem, and I certainly enjoyed reading it. As a Christian myself, it's hard for me sometimes to grasp exactly how grand God is, ...

    Apr 22, 2021
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The Red Lily

    This poem is absolutely stunning!! Your imagery is beautiful, and it truly sucks the reader into the small world you've created. Your writing style is lovely, and the story here ...

    Apr 22, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I tipped my cup of coffee

    This poem is magnificent!! Hi! Wayward here for a quick review! It's a very simple yet impactful poem, and the formatting is absolutely stunning. The way you've combined a very ...

    Apr 22, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ameliorite

    This poem. Is absolutely STUNNING. Hi, Wayward here for a quick review!! Often when reviewing, I select a few phrases or quotes that stand out to me. However, I cannot ...

    Apr 1, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: will the sun show?

    I absolutely love this poem. It suggests that the flowers are a reflection of your own mind, and it's very poignant. Flowers, beautiful but delicate, are the perfect centerpiece for ...

    Apr 1, 2021


One by one they went / And, though each laughed as he returned to earth / Their souls were in their eyes.
— Alfred Noyes (Watchers of the Sky)