waywardxwanderer

This poem is... RIDICULOUSLY beautiful. I'm getting the feeling it was meant to be about Snow White? I love the ambiguity, though. The way you've formatted it, small statements of ...

This poem is absolutely beautiful, I loved it. The way you told it from the perspective of the house is unique and lovely, and the story is so wholesome and ...

This poem is absolutely stunning, and it contains such multitudes of memory and emotion in such a short, lovely way. I don't even have the words for the ache this ...

Holy. Cow. This piece is lovely. You did an INCREDIBLE job. GRAMMAR CRITIQUES: "...letting the wood give him splinters’..." There shouldn't be an apostrophe after splinters. "...gripping it hard he ...

This was incredibly impactful for such a short piece?? I absolutely loved it. Your imagery is so real, and I can almost feel everything Om does. It was also really ...

I was absolutely blown away by this poem. It's stunning, and each and every word carries so much weight. The way you've married the ideas of you trying to stay ...

This poem was absolutely stunning. The way you've put together each stanza is simple and very effective, and your choice of words is lovely. The way you've mirrored the first ...

This poem was incredible?? Firstly, the formatting was very distinctive, and it really helped to get across the point of each stair that she looks down- the stairs are evident ...

This poem is absolutely lovely!! It's very creative, and the way you use words is unique and beautiful. I have no criticisms to offer, just praise to give!! The scene ...

This poem is lovely. The way you've used words here is very creative, and I love the inconsistent and uneasy rhyme scheme you've chosen. This whole poem sets a lovely ...

As with all of your poems, this is absolutely STUNNING. I adore the way you use words and how you draw together all of these ideas to create a story ...

o h w o w . I want to leave a review, even if I don't have any critiques or even words for the way this poem makes me feel. ...

This poem was... absolutely gorgeous. Your extended metaphor is lovely, and the way you keep bringing it back to space makes your love aching and echoing- you can really feel ...

I know I've reviewed several of your poems already but every single time I read one I'm in awe. This one hit me like a truck. The way you use ...

I. am in AWE. This poem is incredible. I absolutely love your writing style, and it's very creative and unique and hopeful. The three stanzas each represent something different, some ...