vincentvinniealonso

Hello, Royal! Wonderful evening, isn't it? Aaannnddd, I'm here to review. Overall, I actually really enjoyed this poem. It's very peaceful and put my mind in a place of real ...

Oi! Just me, vva, here on this gorgeous Friday for a review. Before I get started, I'd like to address something about your description. Don't devalue your own work. By ...

I think you should continue this! The more you write the better you get, so I say to keep going and if you finish this, then you get to know ...

Heyo. Good poem! This isn't the longest review ever, but I thought that the poem had a real strong build and arc. The poem is both conclusive and climatic. I ...

I thought this was a really gorgeous concept. I really liked the idea of the main character cutting their finger. You really managed to smoothly ease into that moment of ...

After having read a lot of your poetry, I think that this is when your writing really started to mature. This poem feels as though it's very confident in it's ...

You were right, this is one of your good ones. I'm not a fan of poetry that rhymes, but yours feels very natural. It's almost lyrically smooth. There's some pretty ...

This was a pretty solid short! I thought that the descriptions were nice and crisp and that despite disliking the 'woman goes against the grain' cliche, I enjoyed this story. ...

This poem is really gorgeous. I've read a lot of poetry about this sort of abusive relationship, but I think that you tackled this poem in a really unique and ...

A very crisp but sincere and interesting depiction of something as simple as bathing. The descriptions are really poetic but they don't become meaningless or pretentious. Everything in this short ...

This poem had a really interesting beat and rhythm that kept it moving very well. It had really great flow and never felt choppy or unnatural. As dearestdeli explained, it's ...

Overall, a very well written piece. The contrast between the two characters is a fun one that creates chemistry, however the character chemistry isn't dependent on the fact that they ...