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Hey there French :D I'm here to help you with this short chapter of yours. I watched out the window I turned away First of all, 'watched' sounds odd. You ...

Hey there Ms. Flower :D You've got a bit of grammar and spelling and such to work on here, so let's see if I can help you out. You start ...

Hey there, Meredith! :D I'm here to annoy you review your piece! an uncross-able desert Uncrossable is one word :P years of memoires At first I though you were trying ...

Hey there, Gilbygirl :D Now I'm sure you see what we see; A big block of text. Hopefully, that was accidental and entirely not your fault. Now besides that, we ...

Hey there Sparkle :D I don't usually review poetry, so I'm just gonna write whatever comes to mind and hope I'm making any sense. First, I liked the rhyme scheme ...

Hey there! I mostly review grammar and spelling, so if I get a bit nitpicky, please ignore me. :D you in return, spend hours reading. This is written awkwardly. It ...

Hello again, WW. :D After seeing this next to your last post, I thought I might as well check it out :P "well designed" You don't need the quotes here. ...

Yo, WritingWolf. I'm here to tell you all about the wonders of your piece :D Art is a mirror. One can create This doesn't really connect as much as you'd ...

Hey there, Supermeggs :D On a Sunday envening That should be 'evening'. playing on a swing just before dinner time in their front yard. This is phrased awkwardly. I'd put ...

Hey there Sherlock :D the tv set TV is an abbreviation, and therefore should be capitalized. hated Assholes like Assholes aren't that special, and shouldn't be capitalized. Just a few ...

Hey there Cailey :D I'm just here to bother you about everything review your piece. So be sure to take my advice. Or not. Doesn't matter to me, I'm not ...

Well since I reviewed he first chapter, I think it's only fair I review the second, aye? ;) “Je t'aime.” I love you. Honestly the first thing I noticed, and ...

I think I'll follow in the steps of Hannah, Mr. Versatile, and edit a paragraph of your work, and since she chose the first paragraph, I think it's only fair ...

Hey there, Ellen! :D I'm not going to do one of my typical grammar and spell check review this time, instead I'm going to review the content you've place forth ...

Hello again, Auxiira :D The first paragraph is bit confusing. Of course with the first and last sentences being the combining factor, it's what was in between that didn't make ...