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Re: My Dearest Friend
HELLO MULTICOLORED STARFISH AND WELCOME TO YWS this piece definitely give off that "you have to know what i'm talking about to understand it" vibe. if i were to take ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 41
AND HERE WE ARE AT THE FINAL CHAPTER I KNOW U HAPPY TO GET RID OF ME BUT LET ME TELL U SOUNDY THIS IS NOT THE END SO LET'S ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 40
TWO MORE TO GO AND THEN I AM OUT OF UR HAIR DONT U WORRY SOUNDY POO OKAY let's get to it now what this chapter does is open and ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 39
WHATS HAPPENING SOUNDY LONG TIME NO SEE JK I KNOW WHAT YOURE THINKING WHEN WILL THE TORTURE END BUT IM HERE TO TELL U IT NEVER WILL OK now lets ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 38
HELLO SOUNDY ARE YOU TIRED OF MY NAME YET??? ME TOO LETS GET THIS ROLLIN okay remember when i said that i'd be on an emotional high and then BOOM ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 37.2
ME??? BACK AGAIN??? YOU KNOW IT LETS GET TO IT "I actually let you go." now THIS is where it finally all clicked in my head how everything went down. ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 37.1
THAT'S RIGHT IM HERE AGAIN LET ME KNOW WHEN U GET BORED OF THIS okay now this here THIS is where i start to feel everything about to reach a ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 36
AND HERE I AM AGAIN ARE U SICK OF ME YET??? NO???? WELL THEN LETS GET CEREAL okay this was one chapter that had me on my tippy-toes the entire ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 35
HELLO SOUNDY I AM BACK AGAIN ok lets get down to serious typically i don’t like nit-picking at grammar or spelling errors because they are easily fixed and don’t usually ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 34
HELLO SOUNDY I AM HERE AS I PROMISED i am going to start from this one cus it only has one review BUT PLEASE LET ME KNOW IF U WANT ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: A Fire Full of Pain
welcome to YWS! apart from the distinct stylistic choices you've made here, keeping each sense and feeling separate form the last, i do enjoy the fact that you've done your ...
Sep 22, 2020 -
Re: Prologue - Fallen Angelle
Hello there! Okay I'll start off first with the nitpicks. She struggles against the metal restraints however, the more she struggles the deeper the restraints dug into her wrist causing ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Falling For You
When I saw Cailey posted a work, I just had to review it ;p Now anyone who knows me knows I'm nowhere near the romantic type, but this right here ...
Sep 1, 2014 -
Re: On a thin line
As once told to me by a fellow member, I usually find the best poetry on this site are the ones that are short and pack a punch. However in ...
Sep 1, 2014 -
Re: There's a narcissist in the mirror
yo yo, veeren here to review this fab-o piece you've written here. alright, first i have to get a few nitpicks out of the way. They told me "You cannot ...
May 2, 2014
