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vanillavelvet13

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  • Poetry » General, General Re: A flower's musings

    Hi Phil! I love the allegory (I think this is the word? Or metaphors) implemented in your story. I think it goes deeper the more one thinks about it. For ...

    Jan 4
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Winter Crush

    Hey, Alex! Oh my god, reading it honestly, really resurfaced emotions I had before on a crush but I think I interpret your work differently than you would. The first ...

    Jan 4
  • Poetry » General, General Re: When the World Ends (aka: a love letter to friendship)

    Hi hi~! Welcome to YWS ! First off, I really love how this short poem is straight to the point and yet has so much meaning that it's open to ...

    Dec 23, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: Self- Love

    Hey! Vanilla here! I absolutely adored your poem. I love these types of poems, the ones with a double meaning, a hidden secret. In this one, it has the whole ...

    Sep 6, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Forever in Love

    Hey! I'm Vanilla, I really loved your poem, it's absolutely magnificent in my opinion. The first verse emits loneliness the person experiences in their life and I think you did ...

    Sep 5, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Health Re: The Monster I have Become

    Hey-o, frogforest! I immediately clicked onto your poem after I saw the trigger warning! I thought it'd be nice to leave a review! Sometimes it’s hard to look at who ...

    Mar 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: The Moon

    Hey MapleWay! Your username's making me want pancakes T~T I was looking through the tabs and I was already taken away with your title! So I thought I'd leave a ...

    Mar 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Ricochet

    Hey there! :3 I really felt this and wanted to give it a review! I just wanted to show how much I really appreciated your work. this is victory. this ...

    Jan 27, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: ​Steam Off a Cup

    Heyo! This poem almost made me say "Yes ma'am, I'll grab you a coffee ma'am!" like a silly, little robot XD! Anyhow, but at the end of yesterday i needed ...

    Jan 27, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: What is Harmony?

    Hey! First off, I really like how you started with Living in harmony, Yet I don't know if the second line should be a question also or not. is that ...

    Jan 27, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, Romantic Re: What love feels like

    Heylo Andrew! (maybe) . This is a review of your emotional poem, "What love feels like" First of all, I loved the straight A's you gave the poem. It really ...

    Jan 25, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: My Mistake

    This poem really reminded me when I broke up with an ex. The pain that came after, before and during the breakup we're all different but one was the same, ...

    Jan 22, 2021


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