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OMG that was really good. As I was reading I felt like I was in a linkin park song... which is a good thing I hope! Can't wait to read ...

WOW! that was pretty freakin amazing. I loved it. I espically liked the topic you choose to write about. I cant wait to read more of your work. :)

you guys should probably read the prolouge to this if you have'nt already. Sorry for any grammer mistakes I was kinda in a hurry when I wrote this so........ thnx;)

that was pretty amazing i liked the flow of it and where he story led you know how to keep the rythm going and that right there shows potential very ...

you have some potential to write keep getting at it.....i know you can improve good job :)

i can relate to your topic graet job:)

i agree with you ..............i know a couple atheists overall i liked the concept

"the scars on her wrist each one tells a different story" is my fav.............um im guessing shes emo?

that was good but if you wrote a little more and less nothings it would have been waaaaay better

i cant wait to read more...........i agree monopoly is pretty boring

i love special place is this cave like thing by our beach house

haha i didnt realize this was chapter two................guess i got to go back and read chapter one

it was ok keep writing

its good but could use some improving

i love this! its sooooooo good keep writing