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This poem left me to wonder and it was very sad in a abusive way. I liked the way you decided to end this piece. But Im not letting you ...

So I am American born, American raised and.......Iraqi. I loved the story the first paragraph had me hooked. I wanted to know why was the kid kidnapped? And as I ...

So I laughed when I read your piece. It's nice to know that there's a guy out there who will like a girl even if she has facial hair. :) ...

First of I want to welcome you to YWS! :D Now this piece was alright but not the best that I've seen. UM...you might want to rate this 18+ since ...

I like your poem not like anything I've ever seen before......which is a good thing. I loved the way you started it...... I can’t stop running but I don’t quite ...

I love this piece..about taking chances and being able to put up with the outcome no matter how many time. this piece was very short and those personally are my ...

I liked your piece alot and thought the flow was really perfect. For someone who was lonely for a night you sure know how to cook up a storm for ...

This pretty much sums the way I have been feeling for like ever. The flow of he poem was perfect and the topic you choose to write about was beyond ...

You really have a way of showing your emotions on paper. For a piece you quickly wrote while waiting on the dentist it was pretty good. It flowed alot but ...

Wow I loved your poem. It reminds me of a friend and how I was the only one who cared for him until he got an extreme makeover and it's ...

HA........I actually laughed while reading this poem because quite frankly your writing style is quite different and kinda gangsta. I enjoyed it and gotta say that it was a good ...

Firs off I want to welcome you to YWS. Now I thought your piece was very powerful and true. There were no grammerical errors that I came across which is ...

Wow that was a sad poem I loved the flow of the poem and how you expressed the way you were feeling. Overall good job. :pirate3: :smt069 :smt072 :backtotopic:

UH.....somebody say AWESOME! that was by far one of the best pieces the I have read about life in general. I guess your trying to say that you may think ...

Wow ............that poem was short, simple and sad ..........quiet frankly it described the way I have been feeling for a while. I really loved it :D So keep up the ...