Published June 14, 2011
Is this it?
Will it always end like this?
Why am I afraid?
To keep going.
The past has changed my point of view.
Go ahead,
Say you’ll be different.
You can’t erase my past.
It’s a shame though.
For all I know,
You could be different.
But that’s a chance I’m not willing to take
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Awh, thank you lovelies
I love this piece..about taking chances and being able to put up with the outcome no matter how many time. this piece was very short and those personally are my favorite.
For all I know,
You could be different.
But that’s a chance I’m not willing to take
The way you ended it was perfect.
Hey There Gorgeous
Good job. I like it, and it is extremely well written for a rough draft xD i love it. Goodjob, and i could relate to many times in my life i have given people second chances, thinking and believing they had changed and just let myself get hurt all over again. Thanks for that deep peice.
Black Ink. x.
That was actually pretty deep and intense. :3 I say keep on writing!