untalentedwriter

Thank you :) haha I honestly just noticed those mistakes now. I just wanted to get everything written down since it was fresh in my head. I should have read ...

The simplicity of this poem is really refreshing and interesting. It's simple, but had such a power. You can feel what your writing. I can honestly picture it in my ...

This poem was so beautifully! It had so much emotion. I loved how you made everything flow. Excellent job!! :D

I liked your poem! It was inspirational in a way!

Cool poem. And I have to agree I didn't think it was preachy at all! :)

How sweet!

It was so good. I really liked the tittle. The first line of the story was my favorite. :)

I really liked your poem.I loved the second stanza.

Awesome poem. The tittle really caught my attention.I loved the third stanza. :D

Hello! your lyrics are really good. I love the whole flow of the words. :D

This poem speaks the true.

Your poem was really good. I loved the tittle.