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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Anorexia Nervosa

    Letter to the Little People: I am beginning to get things on track again. Hopefully, I will begin writing out my entire journey, piece by piece. And, hopefully, you all ...

    Thu Jul 16, 2009 9:59 pm
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Zel

    did you get this from the book Zel?

    Sun Jan 25, 2009 12:50 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Glass Castle

    I thought it was pretty good for a beginner. It was easy to relate to and beautiful. Keep up the good work!

    Fri Jan 02, 2009 3:43 am
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: If You Only Knew

    wow! This is absolutely brilliant! The only thing i advise is to go over it and reedit it with capitals in the correct places and puncuation Also, in the second ...

    Thu Oct 16, 2008 11:40 am
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: With And Without

    You wrote out my life story! Seriously, this is just how i feel Why thankyou!

    Wed Oct 15, 2008 8:39 pm
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My heart is breaking apart

    Brilliant! This is just...well...indescribable! Keep writing!

    Sun Oct 05, 2008 3:34 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sun and the Moon

    Just tellign everyone that it's edited and i don't have the points to repost right now but i will get to it!

    Fri Sep 19, 2008 1:25 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Every Angel Has To Fall Prologue

    More, More, More!!!!! I want more!

    Sat Sep 06, 2008 3:21 pm
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Aching

    The think is true. It is so true. You added in the fact that no one can understand. It's true I am going through the worst tme missing my bf ...

    Thu Aug 21, 2008 2:49 am
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: unnamed poem

    Brilliant! This was absolutley fabulous. I recomend calling it Worlds Apart

    Thu Aug 21, 2008 2:30 am
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Girls Just Wanna Have Fun

    Wow. How can there be too much similies and metaphores? It's called DESCRIPTION!

    Fri Aug 15, 2008 4:12 pm
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Hidden hope

    I actually have the first few chapters typed up! its at the related topic thingy so um check it out! yipeee

    Fri Aug 15, 2008 4:18 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: a dream for a dream-er

    Wow. One simple word; wow. I have never read a poem so intriguing and inspiring. That was beautiful. Probably one of the most beautiful poems i had ever read. If ...

    Tue Aug 12, 2008 3:09 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Place

    hey it was a good poem and i made this mistake when i first started you are supposed to do two reviews before u post anything and then you are ...

    Mon Aug 11, 2008 3:27 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Misery Lane

    suzanne, that was one rude coment

    Mon Aug 11, 2008 1:08 am


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