unsocialbutterfly

:/ sad, but also beautifully written.

This is beautifully written but what did her parents do? What does her grandfather have to do with anything? And also (which I know is very, very nit-picky) there are ...

Nikko! It's nice to see you writing poetry for a change (even though I love your pictures) just to see what's behind your camera instead of in front of it ...

I like this. Possibly I'm a little biased because I love the rain but I think it's both it and your poem are beautiful :)

Aw sad :/ I'm sorry you feel like this but mmmm... It should be tortured Also, fit in It's as nice as a sad poem can be if that makes ...

:) I like it, it's nice.

Aw, I'm so sorry that you feel like that that's terrible. Out of your misery comes a beautiful poem incase that's any consolation.

Aw, sad :( this is really beautiful I think you have a good chance of winning that contest :) Keep writing for Devon!

This is a great poem :) drunk drivers should really be called on their crap and you wrote about it beautifully. I did see though: Towards the top you wrote ...

This is beautiful :) Whoever you end up with will be lucky to have someone like you I'm sure :)

Hi JesusFreak900, Haha wow. Your poem is amazing. From this you sound like "the perfect guy" haha. If you ever right a girl poetry like this I'm sure she'll try ...

Wow this is pretty good. Are you actually going to send this to the movie star you are talking about? And also is there a reason why you didn't use ...

Aw! I'm sorry you feel that way! This is pretty good if the last time you wrote was in second grade. Unless you're now in 3rd grade....haha just kidding. :) ...

This is a really great poem. These are the only things I saw: Before it 's too late Hands balled in to a fist s Great job!

This is really amazing! I liked how you explained from childhood to growing up and just like all the ways you showed that. It's a really good poem. One day ...