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Re: In the old white house
Thank you! I was having a lot of difficulty spelling yesterday! I appreciate your review!
Jul 10, 2013 -
Re: Trust, Truth, and Trying
Love the imagery as well as the analogy of the power! I agree with LoLaBlack. Some parts could be expanded, further deepening the analogy! For example; "Soon the flower weed ...
Jul 9, 2013 -
Re: Dear Pops
Good job! It takes an immense amount of courage to write someone so personal and allowing your heart to feel what it is rightly feeling. I love the "scattered" organization ...
Jul 9, 2013 -
Re: Your reality
Well Done! The last 3/4 of your poem creates an incredible image! Creating a place where these major questions can be pondered in a safe and peaceful environment. "Would you ...
Jul 7, 2013 -
Re: Christmas Poem
Dear Katherinehope, Super sweet poem! Kinda something you would want in a children's book! Your poem had some very awesome moments where the flow was magical and the rhyming scheme ...
Dec 19, 2012 -
Re: god
Very interesting! I agree with everyones thoughts about the structure. But non the less, brilliant content! Not that this matters, but I agree with your philosophy! This is gutless to ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Open Sea
Very very nice :D
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Jack and Jill
My goodness that is sooo good! Hilarious, clever, get rhythm!I would love to see you other work! You seem like an intelligent writer who knows what is going on in ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: A Scratch Beneath The Surface
YOU USE PARADOXES SO WELL! You are very talented! I love the ending! Really counter acts the typical "wisdom" society deems! Keep writing it is great!
Aug 24, 2011