Published August 10, 2011
All the horrors of the sea?
Do I keep my hope alive for calm waters?
Is there even such a thing like calm waters?
Is there such a place like heaven?
Sailor like me, do we ever get to rest?
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Hey YouWishYouHadThis (Funny Name)
Anyway, I LOVE THIS!
Though very disappointed that it was very short piece
One thing I found wrong.
This is the poem you wrote:
The first two lines are rhyming.
And the 3rd and 4th are not.
You see, poetry is all about rhyming or not.
It's what it's mostly based on.
If you're poem is half rhymed and half not rhymed, it's a minus Dude! >.<
Either it has to be fully rhymed or not fully rhymed. Okay? =)
Loved it
Giving this a 9/10 ;P
Cheers and Regards,
Cookie or LM
P.S: Wall post me when you've submitted new poems and I shall be the first one to review it! :'D
Very very nice
I love this! i'm slightly dissipointed that this exceptional peice is not longer....
But it is trully awesome! I will be honest with you it feels more as a draft than a poem because of it's shortness. I think with a few more lines this could be extroidanary poetry. I enjoyed it and am on my way to reveiw other peices of yours, great poem keep up the good work.
Me loves loves loves it
I promised to give you a review... I open your portfolio - And find this
I'm glad I did though since Robert Frost "Fire and Ice" is my number one favorite poem ever!! (As you can see in my signature I'm quite a fan) Haha, now, I'll try finding something of yours instead
Good Luck & Keep Writing
// Demoness
I Owe All Rights To Robert Frost
But All My Other Work Is By Me But i had to quote This
I really like this peice because short and decent and honestly everybody must have passion in their poetry.
Because without passion their is no story or feeling but in this peice I can feel the passion and the emotion
and that why I like this peice. keep writing