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Great concept! The number 3 and the ways it influenced the poem was brilliant! My only suggestion was to give a little more fluidity in your piece is to, makes ...

Great idea! I love the flow of your poem and the strength in its simplicity. I love the shortness in your lines, allowing the readers to feel more through out ...

Great title for a stunningly written poem! Great stanza structure and flow to the poem! My only suggestion would be to this piece had a better series of events. That ...

Woooooow! Great poem! Such a creative and original idea to write about! One of the most powerful metaphors I have ever read! The flow was spot on and the rhymes ...

Beautifully done! I love the length of this piece! Allowing every line to take on a life of their own! The flow of this poem is beautiful! The stanza structure ...

Great poem! Beautiful rhyme scheme! Great flow! At my first look at this piece, I didn't like the structure! But it really plays to the poems strengths as you read ...

Good job! I really enjoyed this poem! I think the title is very suiting of the poem! May even make the "i" a lower case will help empathize the "Believing". ...

Emotions as a title is usually sets writers up for disaster. But I truly adore this poem! The way you started off the intro, by letting the readers know the ...

Incredible story! This is a great approach, letting the readers know what the envelope contains yet still making it appear like a love story. The way you have structured the ...

Beautifully written! I love how your poem is an extension of the shattered mirror metaphor. I believe your stanza really played that your poem perfectly! It kinda looked like a ...

Great Great Great Great Great! It is nice to have an encouraging poem, there are not many! You had amazing flow and emotion! The stanza structure is grand! My favourite ...

Beautiful! Great length and structure to your piece of work! I like every single sentence structured in that poem! It also emoted beautiful emotions! I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme! ...

Incredible! Great flow,rhythm, and emotion. I love the use of "again". My favourite part was the ending! I am dead, Again. Insanely powerful! The structure really makes the piece extremely ...

This is crazy beautifully written! I love how you pieced your words together and the emotion was beautiful! You stanza structure was very ideal and your organization of events was ...

I like the space between your lines! It doesn't just give more significance to each line, but it shows the disorder and precision in each thought! I think the first ...