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  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Body Has Failed Me

    Hey newbie :D, Umaima ere to make a quick review for ya! I will give five points in this review to show you how I felt about your poem! First, ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: A Cup Of Hedgehog

    Awww that thing is soo cute, I fell in love with it as soon as I saw it!! I want it tooo :( It's the most adorable thing I have ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: Poetry Has Never Been For Me

    HEY WritersCanDream, Umaima here to give you a short but descriptive review on review day! I hope your day was good :D Anyways, First, I really enjoyed the poem. It ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Life of an Assassin - Ch. 2

    Hey :D Awesome Awesome story here! I loved it, and above all felt like it was something which would end very nicely! Now starting the serious reviewing, Let's start from ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Can You Grasp It In Your Hand?

    Hey :D Guess who is reviewing this submission for ya? ME! XD Okay let's start shall we? Starting with the title, it was really good. Now I have been seeing ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Free

    Hey :D Umaima here to do the honor of reviewing! I am going to start with the positives then move on to the negatives and then finally tell you my ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, General Re: The Passing of Time

    Is it me or your age and this poem seem to have a funny effect kinda thing! Anyways her! Umaima here to review you submission Positives: I felt your poem ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: You

    Right now I am going to be that one reviewer who corrects your formatting ;) By the way hey, Umaima here to review your wonderful poem! Now let's start with ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: The Perfect need

    Hey Cracks :D Umaima here to do some commentary on this fine piece of work! I will start with how great I thought it was. This poem was definitely one ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Out of Reach

    Hey deans, once again! I am going to be giving you a short review here! I think the plot was nice and the poem idea was great! I loved the ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Doom Making It's Way.

    This was funny! Hey, Umaima here to review your submission. First of all I have a question for you: How could you write this amazing poem a day before social ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: We're fine

    Dean Deans Deans :D, Look who's here t review! ME! So hey :P, let's start the reviewing shall we? I am going to start with my favorite points then my ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Shattered

    Hey :D Okay I am going to start with correcting your mistakes and then will tell you the overall review! There's only the punctuation error seen here which I will ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ​Mirror to Mind.

    Guess who's here? Guess who's gonna a the review for you? Yeah, it's me. The one and only :P haha Okay so HEY SLUSHY *screams with a high pitch voice* ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: As The Soul Sinks

    Hey space soldier! Okay, so yes your poem was nice. I liked your whole concept and idea behind it and value this poem! This poem was touching and I can ...

    Sep 29, 2013


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