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Re: True Love's Kiss~Chapter One and A Half
well I'm here do a little review here again. As you know I read the first one and reviewed that one to. well the pacing of the story seems to ...
Jun 18, 2014 -
Re: True Love's Kiss~A retelling of Beauty and the Beast
well this is an interesting little piece. Let me tell you it's a lot different then anything else I've read on this site. Then again I haven't really read that ...
Jun 9, 2014 -
Re: The Boys in Blue Chapter 1
Hello just here to do a small review. Well the beginning was alright. Stating the place/area of the crime. Though I didn't really see a date or a year, so ...
May 29, 2014 -
Re: A Matter Unusual: Prologue
Well hello, I'm here to do a little Review. Try not to pay to much attention to possible mistakes in this review I'm doing this from a place where it's ...
May 27, 2014 -
Re: Writing
wow what a cool poem. i really speaks to me and the people of this website. It also shows what it's kind of like to be a writer to non ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Daddy
hello there just going to do a small review wow what a nice poem you've written. This really makes me appreciate my dad and what I have and that's good. ...
Mar 24, 2014 -
Re: I'll make Writers out of you
Wow this was a very unique idea. As soon as I saw the title I had a feeling it would something like this. And let me just say this was ...
Mar 23, 2014 -
Re: Feelings for Joan
Hello there welcome to yws just going to do a small review. I like it, it's like an interesting love letter. Not to long but a bit short. I don't ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: Fireflies
Hell there just going to do a small review. I thought this story was pretty alright, it was just a little relaxing read about it. Nothing over the top. Just ...
Jan 2, 2014 -
Re: Santa Claus is on his way !!
Hello just going to do a small review. It's the time of year so something like this is always nice to read. It rhymed it was simple and it was ...
Dec 25, 2013 -
Re: The Crooked Forest
hey just going to do a little review here also nice little cliff hanger there well this was an interesting story and simple story. The friends seem like the basic ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: The First Day of Christmas
Hey just a small review here. well looking at the title i wouldn't have guessed what it was about, catching the reader off guard. If you were going for sad ...
Dec 22, 2013 -
Re: Deleted
Alright this, this was is nice. I like what you did with the title, it made me kind of surprised (in a good way) when I found out she was ...
Dec 22, 2013
