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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: True Love's Kiss~Chapter One and A Half

    well I'm here do a little review here again. As you know I read the first one and reviewed that one to. well the pacing of the story seems to ...

    Jun 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: True Love's Kiss~A retelling of Beauty and the Beast

    well this is an interesting little piece. Let me tell you it's a lot different then anything else I've read on this site. Then again I haven't really read that ...

    Jun 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Politics Re: The Boys in Blue Chapter 1

    Hello just here to do a small review. Well the beginning was alright. Stating the place/area of the crime. Though I didn't really see a date or a year, so ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: A Matter Unusual: Prologue

    Well hello, I'm here to do a little Review. Try not to pay to much attention to possible mistakes in this review I'm doing this from a place where it's ...

    May 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Writing

    wow what a cool poem. i really speaks to me and the people of this website. It also shows what it's kind of like to be a writer to non ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Daddy

    hello there just going to do a small review wow what a nice poem you've written. This really makes me appreciate my dad and what I have and that's good. ...

    Mar 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: I'll make Writers out of you

    Wow this was a very unique idea. As soon as I saw the title I had a feeling it would something like this. And let me just say this was ...

    Mar 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Feelings for Joan

    Hello there welcome to yws just going to do a small review. I like it, it's like an interesting love letter. Not to long but a bit short. I don't ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Fireflies

    Hell there just going to do a small review. I thought this story was pretty alright, it was just a little relaxing read about it. Nothing over the top. Just ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Santa Claus is on his way !!

    Hello just going to do a small review. It's the time of year so something like this is always nice to read. It rhymed it was simple and it was ...

    Dec 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Humor Re: The Crooked Forest

    hey just going to do a little review here also nice little cliff hanger there well this was an interesting story and simple story. The friends seem like the basic ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Historical Fiction Re: The First Day of Christmas

    Hey just a small review here. well looking at the title i wouldn't have guessed what it was about, catching the reader off guard. If you were going for sad ...

    Dec 22, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Deleted

    Alright this, this was is nice. I like what you did with the title, it made me kind of surprised (in a good way) when I found out she was ...

    Dec 22, 2013


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— Mark Twain