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trashykawa

And then, I was a careless fool

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Warrior Soul

    i very deeply wish you out of your state of misery. Stay gold :)

    Dec 27, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: It Happened in the Middle of the Night.

    thanks a lot! :)

    Dec 27, 2018
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: To You With Hate

    this is your masquerade, and you have played it well.

    Dec 27, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: It Happened in the Middle of the Night.

    Okay, so i know exactly what you mean! And normally my style is to divide the poems into stanzas of four or eight lines, and i'd actually done the same ...

    Dec 27, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Warrior Soul

    This is beautiful and VERY deep. I have nothing else to say (i was actually looking to review to get some points, but well...), Keep writing :)

    Dec 27, 2018
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Go Out With A Bang

    Thank you so much! I admire the way you analyzed my story, if i knew it would fall under such careful study, i would've been a bit more nervous publishing ...

    Dec 27, 2018
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Go Out With A Bang

    thank you, i'm not sure about the talent thing, though; my sister is a far better write than me but she won't publish any of her work online. And yeah, ...

    Dec 26, 2018
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Counting

    Note: This review has been deleted

    Dec 25, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Story of You: (A Ballad)

    thanks. it means a lot. most people said it was nice but lacked "substance" when i showed it to them a couple years ago, so i was bit....dubious publishing this.

    Dec 24, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: To my best friend...

    hope you and your friend stay in touch. best friends dont give up on each other. :)

    Dec 23, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Lost, or Alone?

    its great. i like this part a lot: "What if I say Nothing when you asked where I was, yesterday But will you be here tomarrow?" its like you're asking ...

    Dec 23, 2018
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Mask

    *gasps* Cassandra clare? shadowhunters? (the book, not the series?) no? she's a writer.

    Dec 23, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: PubG !

    who knew how deep pubg was

    Dec 22, 2018
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Mask

    "Be careful what masks you wear, child, lest you lose your true face forever." should've listened to cassandra. (-TDA, qoaad)

    Dec 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: wonder

    "what beautiful thoughts, my friend"

    Dec 22, 2018


Life’s disappointments are harder to take if you don’t know any swear words.
— Bill Watterson