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Hi! Hiraeth here for a short review. This is good, well written; your story line is well thought-up. However, as always, I'd say that when writing a short story, include ...

Hi shikora, this is Hiraeth, here for a review. First, excellent work on explaining the surroundings and atmosphere takes place in. You lweft no confusion in the readers' minds as ...

Hi Luke! so this was like the first poem i read when i first joined the site; and I wasn't confident enough to review this back then, so i'm finally ...

Hi Nishtha! (or Nishthab?) This is hiraeth here for a review on this very lovely poem that you've written. So, let me first comment the structure of this poem: it ...

Hi @katnes! So i'm here for a review for this amazing poem that you wrote. I can feel your heart ache as if it was my own; and i'm sure ...

Hi @Ventomology! So this is really, really good: just the right amount of sass, attitude and confidence that made this a very witty read. Your diction is good, REALLY good, ...

Hi! Hiraeth here to review this awesome short story of yours (hope this helps). The story follows an interesting story line; and you managed to take me through to the ...

Hi @RavenBlack! I'll start by saying that this is brilliantly written. You're flow is perfect, diction is appropriate for nearly all ages, and you had my attention throughout the three ...

so its already been said, but i'm just repeating it for effect: Reading a very long single paragraph with crammed sentences, is very, very difficult for the reader, not only ...

Lovely. This does things to my heart, this sooo beautiful. First, I must tell you what you have achieved here. Normally, I have very little patience and if the story ...

wow. It looks like the short story section has been abducted by murderous characters. I read Trial by Tears (also about manslaughter) and before that there's Go out With a ...

Hi sweta! I like the message you convey through this poem; we know that even if we forgive someone, trust is a fragile thing, and cannot be fixed once broken. ...

Hi! Let's begin with saying that this is lovely. And some parts it leaves you a little confused, but the vague and slightly abstract nature of the poem is appealing ...

This is a great poem. it holds an optimistic view on how falling in love or being in love feels like. I love how this implies that life is gray, ...

i stared at this for like fifteen minutes. like, this is sooo sad (depressing might be a better word?)... though i kind of noticed that's your style....... so. i go ...