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Hi again, cyr. I'm back with another bunch of comments that probably make no sense :p (p.s i'm writing in the dark so there might be typos) Okay, reading your ...

Hi Cyr! I was just going through the green room and saw that this still needed a review, so here I am. I'm just going to go from top to ...

Hi TheMulticoloredCyr! I'm here again with a review for you :) Oh, and before I forget; yes, I would like to be tagged as these come out. So excellent chapter, ...

Hi horisun, it's been a while since i've done a review for you, so here goes: Okay, did not see that twist coming! Man, little sisters are quite the rage ...

Hi Jade! Congratulations on being named Featured member, you totally deserve it! I'm here to give you a review on this poem of yours. First: Structure Since this is poetry, ...

Hi FireSpyGirl! Okay, i definitely got Freddie Kruger vibes off the start of the chapter. Creeped me out; it's the perfect mix of horror and suspense. Personally, if someone messaged ...

Hey! I'm back, gonna give this a review because i didn't get a chance before :) First off, great beginning! Adding that quote at the top made the story so ...

Hi averyismediocre! (by the way, i totally disagree with you username, you are so not mediocre :) ) Okay, like I usually do when i'm reviewing poetry, i'll point out ...

Hi! So do i dare to review this? First off, things are a bit unclear. Your tones....mocking? sarcastic? lamenting about bad writing?(which isn't really bad; that would be you criticising ...

Hi again, starryknight! I did your other work's review first, but i'm back for this because the other part was interesting - and because I needed to read more. First, ...

Hi, starryknight! I'm here to give you a short review on your chapter. Lets start with the improvable aspects: Papa will be okay. Since your story is set in the ...

I'm back again :) Okay, things are beginning to heat up. I'm kind of beginning to worry about Briar- what she's doing is definitely a crime and against goodness and ...

Hey! I'm gonna leave a short review on this one since no one else seems to have gotten to it. Intriguing chapter. I mean, I'd rather go and read the ...

Hi TheMultiColouredCyr! Happy Review Day! I just saw you wanted a review on this so i decided to pop in. You've got a great start to your story. Totally compelling. ...

Hi Zoom! Here again :) But something about my expression must’ve turned him around, for he hops off his futon and copies me, striding the length of our bedroom, face ...