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That was probably one of the best scripts I've read on here! I absolutely love the randomness! This is like my brain on paper! (Totally random and sometimes doesn't make ...

Hi, my name is Tori and I'll be reviewing your work today! In the town of Cananea, just inside the Mexican border, there is a small, brown store by the ...

I thought that was absolutely fantastic! The job of a writer is to paint a picture in the reader's mind, and sir, you did it! You took me away to ...

I stared at myself in the mirror, watching my thighs, my stomach, my arms, my everything jiggle. The thing about being fat was that you got used to it. You ...

I liked it, it didn't stray to far from the original plot, and you kept it true (for the most part) to the stroy. Have you ever heard of ? ...

You wallow around in Homework Help, Waiting for someone to give a yelp. You shake off the mud and curl your tail, Leaving behind a math-laden trail. You sweep down ...

Review----- As Harry, Ron and Hermione left the headmaster’s office they realised that the war wasn’t totally over. So many lives were lost, Remus, Tonks, Fred, Colin Creevy and many ...

It had a nice lesson at the end of the story, I just didn't like the way death talks. Death isn't everything, and it may be everywhere, doesn't mean it ...

That was hilarious! I must say that I am a Twilight fan and I have read the books 2x each. And Meep, you have to add another choice to your ...

That was wonderful!!! It is probably the best short story I have read in a long time. You captured the emotions just right. The way you wrote it took me ...

A mother, a father, siblings, I was the youngest. That sentence sounds a little choppy to me, how about rewording it? Something like this, "A mother, a father, and siblings, ...

here are some of mine- No More Dead Dogs The Acorn People and there's this book we had to read in 4th grade, something about a family coming from England ...

That was very nice! I do have a lot of questions- Is the MC boy or girl? Young or old? Do they actually know how to play the piano? Was ...

Loved it! It was very nice! (Though I still like 'Little Boy' even more!) Now time for the real review: There's not much I'd like you to change, stanza 2 ...

Oh my gosh! I loved it! I wish I could've showed this to my friend while s/he was going through depression, it was terrible. The rhyme scheme sounded a little ...