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I loved this movie. I thought it was great how Emma and Ryan's characters (I forgot the character names =) didn't have sex the first time. I also loved that ...

Here at request. :) I'll be marking all my corrections/comments in red. Sitting firmly like a Tudor Love this line. I'm guessing you're referring to the Tudors as in King ...

I'm sorry I don't have enough time to do a full critic, so I'll quickly point out the main things. I have just got to my post in Ypres. A ...

I have a question, is this about a slave escaping? If so, I would choose a different plot. Slavery is the most used subject of books. That and vampires. If ...

I'm not a Jew hater or anything like that, but I find the subject of your poem rather interesting. :) D ays with "perfect" people filling the world, fill his ...

He always talks but doesn't say alot. A lot is two words and also the most horrid adjective of all time. (My teacher taught me to hate 'a lot' in ...

This stocky yellow cab comes to a halt at the base of this concrete cage, eight staggering stories high and a Metra train wide, as my ears carry me inside ...

Yay! I love reviewing haiku's. :D so deliciously cosy. I'm not too sure how being cosy is delicious. It feels like that you just came up with a "comfort" word ...

Hello there, Forestqueen! I only have one little nit pick with your poem. Found only in Idaho and India This line would have more force if written like this- "Found ...

With a title like "I Want to Write", I was expecting some immature, novice piece of work. (No offence to any novice who reads this, we all started off as ...

Very nice. :) I only have one little nit pick. Ripples as I dip in my hand, I think you should add "It" or some type of pronoun to the ...

Hey ichigo! Very well done! Like Jasmine said above me ^^^^^, I love the type of poems that get you thinking it's a love poem (romantically speaking) and it turns ...

I think Alfreto covered just about everything. I admit, the story was slightly cliche, but it's based off a Taylor Swift song, so I guess it has to be. haha. ...

Great poem, I can really relate to it at this time in my life. Now on to the critique- You ran, as to be aborted, That part sounded very forced, ...

Remember, when you post some of your work you need to review at least 3 (I think, correct me if I'm wrong) other people's work. That does sound very advanced ...