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Re: Year Thirteen
thank you
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Year Thirteen
thank you
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Voices of the Ice: Chapter 4
thank you for reading
Feb 25, 2017 -
Re: The Bright Side: Excerpt
well, the miranda rights have to be recited for any conversation between law enforcement and a suspect to be usable evidence in a court of law, thus it is not ...
Feb 17, 2017 -
Re: The Bright Side: Excerpt
thank you,
Feb 17, 2017 -
Re: The Bright Side: Excerpt
Miranda rights are for conducting interrigations, they aren't said before an arrest. I agree otherwise, thanj you for reviewing
Feb 17, 2017 -
Re: Voices of the Ice: Chapter 2
haha, warm meals and dead bodies. i actually pulled the uploads a long time ago because that chrissy girl who was doing reviews of it said her mother was surfing ...
Feb 3, 2017 -
Re: The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 2.2 - Wildfire
ignore this
Jan 30, 2017 -
Re: Voices of the Ice: Chapter 1 *DEPRECATED*
thats frustrating, i get "flat dialogue" complaints quite often and reading them aloud doesn't seem to help. i'll have to additional research on dialogue before i get into the next ...
Jan 29, 2017 -
Re: Voices of the Ice: Chapter 1 *DEPRECATED*
Rodney's character and the competency of the guards are things I can definitely elaborate on in the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing!!
Jan 26, 2017 -
Re: Al and Gerald
thank you for reviewing
Jan 17, 2017 -
Re: Al and Gerald
I wrote this back in September and never published it, forgot about it until I was looking through my last years work. please do tell me what you think though.
Jan 10, 2017 -
Re: Cure me from my mind
Oh, the speaker's shyness was in reference to them not being able to share their imagination in others. The mention of love was because the speaker is saying "Hey there, ...
Jan 9, 2017 -
Re: Denver
Funny you mention John Denver. This actually started as a piece of writing to describe the final minutes of his life, but sort of evolved into something more broad than ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Why I Am a Good Rapper
sweet mother
Dec 24, 2016
