tigeraye

This is a neat enough story, although I don't necessarily agree with the message. There are millions of writers who have struggled, yet managed to get noticed without having to ...

This is a very entertaining story -- especially for a rough draft. Your writing is very fluorescent with adequate descriptions of both characters, and inner thoughts of the main character. ...

hello! I always like reading coming of age stories like this one, so I decided to read through this. The gist of the plot, is the girl moving out with ...

So the afternoon could have gone a lot better. There was nothing wrong with admitting that. It wasn't his fault after all. Well, only slightly. He cradled his wounded arm ...

Hello! I went and started reading this like I said I would, since this is old and has already been reviewed a hefty amount, this will end up being pretty ...

hello again! If my reviews are bad and I'm bothering you with them, just tell me and I'll go away x_x Otherwise, let's take a look at this chapter. The ...

Hello, not sure if you'll read this because your account seems to have been dormant since this piece was uploaded, but I'll save it from the back of the green ...

hello. The genre of your work interests me, because "Realistic" and "Fantasy" tend to contradict each other. It'll be interesting to see what you pull off here. I heard a ...

This was definitely a disturbing piece, and left me feeling uncomfortable throughout, but I'm certain that was exactly what you were aiming for. One thing that strikes me right away, ...

Out of all the works I've read and will read on this site, I think I'll remember this as one of the most endearing. Characters, to me are what writers ...

Ok! I finally caught up, ready to review this part x_x I'll start off with a few comments on the story itself. The plot is intriguing to me, and I ...

Hi there. I've never reviewed any poems before, so this will be a learning experience for me, heheh. I guess what I'll do is go through line by line, tell ...

Hi, I have another short review, heheheh. “W-well according to A-Andrew’s source, they wear l-long black robes that touch the g-ground and a s-scary looking m-mask that obscure t-their face,” ...

Hi again! I'll be blunt about it - I found this chapter rather boring. What I got from it was Silenus and the other guy were headed to the forest ...

Hi again!! I read up to chapter five today, so it won't be long until I review the chapter you actually wanted reviewed, heheheh. Just a quick couple of things ...