tigeraye

This review might seem a little bit critical so read past the first paragraph at your caution. But first I'll say that I do really like your writing style -- ...

I like the amount of emotion you put into this -- there's a very sense of humanity in the narrative that I like to see with writing. You captured exactly ...

I thought the idea of this story was interesting. It was fast paced, the plot of the missing mother is quite intriguing, and overall I think the story has a ...

Hello! Neat story, I think you did a lot of things well, here. Your narrative is concise and to the point, it makes for a very easy to follow story, ...

I think this a well written, stylistically. There are very few if any grammatical errors, and your style of writing commends itself with just the right amount of emotion for ...

Hello again! This chapter is shorter than the others, and your writing has improved to the point where I don't have much of anything to point out. Perhaps the beginning ...

Hello again. I thought this was another really good chapter, your sense of detail and emotion is very powerful, and things definitely did pick up in drama rather quickly. You ...

Hello! I saw the third part in the green room, and since you aren’t that far ahead, decided to go back and read the first part instead. I thought it ...

This is a nice piece of writing -- your characters and dialogue both come off as greatly authentic and entertaining. I love the relationship between your characters and the characters ...

I think there were a ton of things you did well here, and not a whole lot you did wrong. I always enjoy stories that are careful with the introduction ...

Right from the beginning of this piece of writing, I knew it would be compelling. And that’s just off the first paragraph – which I found to be ingenious by ...

Why did I join creative writing, I question myself in an empty sun room on a cool winter day. I like this opening paragraph because it asks the reader a ...

I think DeepCrystal and TheShauzer hit the nail on the head, and this seems to be more of a personal piece I'll keep this review brief, but this is a ...

Now this story has some truly amazing descriptive writing -- in particular, I really love your sophisticated style of writing towards the beginning. It shows a finite level of expertise ...

The gymnasium in the school was pretty big; there was enough room for two classes. In all four parts there were basketball hoops hanging on the walls, at the end ...