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Re: Life
I like the way you have written this. so many poems especially those about life, give one the impression that the author is trying to be as profound as possible. ...
Jan 12, 2018 -
Re: If cops were paid by the hour:
excellent story . I enjoy the lack of a fourth wall, reads like a satire of a cheesy action movie trailer for me. reminds me of a book I read ...
Jan 11, 2018 -
Re: Boredom
edgy enough to make alt girls swoon if you read it all dramatic like down at the free trade coffee shop. If you can't seem to shake the boredom before ...
Jan 11, 2018 -
Re: What to look for in a woman? Does the Ring fit flawlessly?
hey man, being a guy, this speaks to me. although you might want to watch out when you put stuff about most women these days being feminist ( something with ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: Humphrey
hey thar, I am pretty awful at reviewing... so uh I guess I'll what I thought of it. the short tale of Humphrey the elephant was quite enthusing, and funny ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: Placebo
hey thar, first off, I am quite fond of the way poetry is formatted ( like Dumbledore and knitting patterns). yours is pretty sweet. how did you do that? as ...
Feb 15, 2015 - Re: Ridble No. 1 Jun 10, 2014
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Re: Game On Level 0.1
happy review day!!!!!! well i must say you have my interest. the first thing i thought about this was that this must be set over the pond, because no red ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: The Violist
happy review day!!!!! i wish i had read this story earlier, its so good! like wolfware1 said, the characters were very believable, and your use of imagery made the story ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: In The House Of The Once-Righteous
happy review day, from what i can tell, this poem is well written, but we don't really pick apart stuff in tenth grade English :) however, i am slightly confused. ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Among The Twinkling Stars; 1.2
Uhhhh......you have my interest. What the hell happened? Why are all the people dead? Did north Koreans finally build a nuke that works ? Did the aliens come back and ...
May 21, 2014 -
Re: The Devil's Day
So the squirrel represents you and the shadow also represent you cause this poem is a cry for help! Good poem though, random person I have never met before in ...
May 21, 2014 -
Re: What The Heck?? Chapter 1
hey man, this is interesting. the first I thought about this was that you or your character lives across the pond. on account of there being different ways of saying ...
May 19, 2014 -
Re: Hipsters and Goldfish
hipsters are some weird people. don't they become too main stream when the say they are hipsters? you can spot a hipster from a mile away these days, so wouldn't ...
May 18, 2014 -
Re: How Does One Say Goodbye?
first off, if this actually happened, I'm sorry for your loss. secondly, this is deeper than the Marianas trench, man. my grandmother stayed at one of those places for awhile, ...
May 18, 2014
