thomasmkraus

I love your word choice! It's got such an intellectual, adult feel to it and it's just lovely! I really liked how this was set up. I'm not usually a ...

I like the imagery that you have throughout this piece. The images created are very vivid and I can really picture what you're describing in explicit detail. "living within our ...

Oh my god. Can I just tell you that this piece was beautiful? Every inch of this was structurally, emotionally, and phonetically tied together perfectly. I couldn't find a single ...

Hey, Pax. I'm just going to do the whole review-your-piece thing. Hope you don't mind, do you? No? Okay, good haha. So, I've already talked to you a few times ...

Thomas here for a review! Welcome to YWS by the way! Here we go: For starters, I think that this is a very good start. While revision is advised, it's ...

Hello again, Purple! How are you doing? I really liked this poem! The imagery was absolutely flawless and you really have a way of pulling the reader in. I've really ...

Wow. This poem went by really fast, but it left a feeling lingering in the air after I finished reading it. Hi, Purple! Thomas in for a review! First with ...

This. Is. Brilliant. This is quite possibly one of my favorite poems that I've ever read. You have such a strong voice and tone here that it just sets the ...

I really like this. It's only three lines, but it feels like there is so much depth to it. I can really see these images in my head, and I ...

Welcome to YWS! I'm Thomas, relatively new, but I can tell you that this website is amazing. Here's a review of your poem! I really liked this. The idea of ...

I absolutely love this format. Normally, I'm not one for typography, seeing as how most of the time, it doesn't really succeed, but you did a very good job of ...

I enjoyed reading this piece. Your voice, tone, and word choice were precise and spot on throughout. There were specific lines that really just stuck out for me and were ...

Hello, dear. Thomas here for a review! I really loved your imagery throughout this piece. You really gave the dark feeling to this poem that it needed, but the darkness ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I think that the form of it was very unique, and I didn't recognize the style from anywhere before (which is a very good thing). ...

Hello, dear. Thomas here for a review! I really liked this poem a lot. I absolutely adore that you had absolutely no punctuation whatsoever. It made this poem flow a ...