Welcome to YWS! I'm Thomas, relatively new, but I can tell you that this website is amazing.
Here's a review of your poem!
I really liked this. The idea of the human race being now seen as they actually are, a small race of "bipeds", was really genius. I enjoyed reading through this piece. It kept my attention well, and your word choice was really well done.
"Balance beaten to death as an innocent bystander."
This line was just brilliant. I don't know what it is, but it makes me really think about the world and how utterly screwed up we are. I believe that you really hit the nail on the head with a lot of this poem and am really impressed in the quality of your work.
I'm really looking forward to reading more from you.
You have a lot of talent and will really do well on this website.
Congratulations!
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