thirstyhand

First off, I'd like to say that the shortness and simplicity of this poem is refreshing. You were pretty straightforward with it. However, I was confused about when you say ...

I felt that this was a very descriptive work overall. However, at some points, such as the first paragraph, there seemed to be one too many metaphors/similes. Besides that, your ...

If this poem were to be summed up into one word, it would be cute. It was an incredibly cute poem. I think it has to do with the fact ...

My first reaction to this work was "wow". I actually felt the breeze, but that may be due to the fact that I am sitting directly below an air vent. ...

I am confused about the prospect of this poem. There are many possibilities about what could be going on with the main character's father in this poem. 1) He is ...

Hello, I am Tamara, and I would like to start off by telling you that I enjoyed this poem quite a bit. I do a lot of starring out the ...

First of all, I can tell that this is somewhat personal to you. This is why I was surprised that I was able to relate to it. I am the ...

Oh my goodness. This poem really made me chuckle! This definitely ties in to the call of nature. So basically the bathroom was occupied, and nature called you. I think ...

My first reaction to reading this was "wow". The clarity of this poem was incredible. I am not sure if I am able to give criticism to this! I think ...

I noticed that this poem is very brief, but if it possesses significant meaning for you personally, then the length does not matter. As far as criticism, I would suggest ...

I almost see this poem as foreshadowing the life that the girl has ahead of her. Indeed, it is "just the beginning of all the pain a woman must feel." ...